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What's she like

November 6, 2014
By ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)


When people ask me question about her, I generally say she's like me.

A shy and sly soul engaged with memory but shining her in made glee.

I can feel the warmth of her hands when I clasp mine together in recalling.

You would think I am pondering very hard but in reality I am stalling.

I can already hear her voice calling me, so sweet it energizes her words.

And once it reaches my ears my heart reaches higher than flighing birds.

Darker than coffee indeed but her lips are more flavorful than tea.

If it weren't for her pretty eyes guiding me then I probably woudn't see.

Slender bodied beauty but thicker where it counts.

I give her all credits, never will she be denounced.

It doesn't bother me that she's so shy, doesn't bother me she's so timid.

For she's obviously made an impression; this is her poem meaning my love is still unfinished.

Can he love indeed, he loves in more ways than many will ever know.

He walks the winding road to earth, ajourney ever so slow.

A life once of total chaos, but to see her makes it okay.

For she makes him lose so many words that he digs for things to say.

It must be real no dream's this sweet, no taboo sweeter than she.

A king of poetry, god meets godess, so she is my dancing queen.

No one knows how we feel, that we both can agree, for my heart is a jewel in her hand.

She's steady amazing me, her poem is proof, no line of mine was ever so grand.

What is love? That is the question and I think I found the answer.

No numbers to calculate, no analytical theories, I just gaze at my beautiful dancer.

What she's given me is past intimacy, a feeling I refuse to fight.

And once more I'm at a loss for describing what she's like.


The author's comments:

My recent girlfriend made me a poem and I just responded to it.


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BigBobby said...
on May. 1 2017 at 2:11 pm
BigBobby,
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this a really nice poem

on May. 5 2015 at 2:33 pm
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

thank you thank you XD I think it's the way that we can manipulate words when we want that's the sexy part XD

on May. 4 2015 at 1:38 pm
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

thank you XD

on May. 4 2015 at 9:25 am
passion_poet19 GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Someday i would stop wondering where i went wrong and know where i went right"

i really never meant a boy that was into poetry, it's very shocking but sexy in a way.

on May. 4 2015 at 9:24 am
passion_poet19 GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Someday i would stop wondering where i went wrong and know where i went right"

this is really sweet!

on Apr. 14 2015 at 1:22 pm
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

merci lol would you believe me if I told you that this was a literal response to a poem she made for me XD those were good times lol But thank you for answering and I'm glad you enjoyed it

on Apr. 13 2015 at 10:19 pm
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM, Nevada City, California
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Favorite Quote:
Be Yourself, Be Unique, Be Me. :) - By BeautyWhispers

Beautiful! I can't believe how amazing this is!!! It shocked me into reading it from the start, very beautifully wrote and meaningful. I loved the way you answered to her poem in such a kind flattering romantic way, any girl would luv to have a boyfriend/girlfriend or even a friend who would do that:) Very well done Poetic!

on Feb. 25 2015 at 2:58 pm
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

Wow XD It's always nice to write for you guys :) thank you

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 24 2015 at 5:26 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson

This is very good, I echo TaylorWintry. Lucky girl and I'm going to check out more of your stuff!

on Jan. 17 2015 at 8:07 pm
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

Thx, bby girl. Glad u like it

on Jan. 16 2015 at 8:52 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Hello! Just wanted to say OH MY GOSHH. This is absolutely beautiful, and in sort of a creepy-weird way, this is the kind of poem I wish my ex-boyfriend wrote about me. >.> More than a few things highlighted in your poem were things that I've been told about myself (i.e. dancer, poet, warm hands lol), and it just made me happy for that special girl of yours. Besides the fact that you probably just won a place in her heart forever, the writing quality in all of this is really nice. There were subtle rhymes that were a bit spontaneous, but I feel like that added to the beauty of this piece. By far, my favorite two lines were "Slender bodied beauty but thicker where it counts." and "You would think I am pondering very hard but in reality I am stalling." Super cute & clever. Really really nice job on this one! Later!

on Jan. 11 2015 at 7:31 pm
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

thx. Glad u like it.

on Jan. 11 2015 at 3:36 pm
itsyourmaingirl SILVER, Flint, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Show me a family of readers and I will show you the people who will change the world.

This is such a good poem that made me feel happy and left me wanting to read more.