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The deal

September 26, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

Here's the deal
we must heal whatever's wrong
it takes to long
and if it dares
continue this pain
our love is strained.
And as for me?
I've had enough
yes life is rough
But don't take it out
on me cause I'm here
I'll miss you my dear.

The author's comments:
Not so sure about this one...

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bjmm22 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 2 2014 at 4:30 pm
bjmm22 BRONZE, White Plains, New York
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Favorite Quote:
If you're going through hell, keep going.
-Winston Churchill

THis would make a kickass first verse in a song.