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September 28, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

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I’m feeling like I’m wishing
Like a part of me is breaking
like a change is quickly coming
like my hands will not stop shaking

I’m feeling like its hard
And its not worth all this pain
I’m feeling like I need to cry
I wish that it would rain.

I can’t say what I’m feeling
I’m not quite sure what’s wrong
I need to start the healing
Play this sweet sad song

© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico

The author's comments:
I wrote this like last year and I just found it. But it's nice, it has a pretty ring to it I think... I don't know.
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This article has 40 comments.

steff123456789 said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 10:46 am
writters. writters. writters.
steff123456789 said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 10:44 am
YEAH GIRL YOU GETTIN COMPLIMENTS LEFT AND RIGHT GIRL. YOU ARE AN AZMAZIN RIGHTER. YOU IS LIKE NIKOLAS SPARCS. GIRL. YOU ARE GRATE.
steff123456789 said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 10:42 am
it aint relatin to me grl you know, it was short
peace&love321 said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 10:42 am
yo grrrrrrl, what it is. dis be steff 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9. dis aint no peace and love, you know.
steff123456789 said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 10:39 am
IT MOVED YOU? to where? yo it didnt move me grrrrrrl
steff123456789 said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 10:38 am
yo grlllll i be likinnnn this but it was kinda short i wasnt ready6 for it to end you 9knowwwwwww i l6uh9hhhhh you
Jacee007 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:44 pm
Jacee007 GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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Wow what a beautiful poem!

So well written!

Can you check out some of my poems plz;)
lemonygirl97 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:10 pm
lemonygirl97 BRONZE, Fort Hunter, New York
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I think it has a beautiful ring to it. The passion and deepness carriend on in this poem moves me.
love&peace123 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 6 2010 at 4:50 pm
love&peace123 BRONZE, Pemberville, Ohio
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i loved reading this, i read it a few times actually, i think most everyone can relate to it, it was wonderful
hannahbee7 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 8:02 am
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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thank you I'm glad my poetry can realate to someone
Lixxy_93 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 14 2009 at 10:18 pm
Lixxy_93 DIAMOND, Westminster, California
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This poem fits me perfectly right now, its always amazing to see your own feelings come from someone else's words. Wonderful work
troubleshot said...
on Oct. 14 2009 at 7:56 pm
I think everyone can relate to this poem in some way. i thought it was very nice to read.
aRunningTourist BRONZE said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 1:40 am
aRunningTourist BRONZE, Pomona, California
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I love how you include weather and music. When i got over a tough break up i just wanted everything to be miserable. Including the weather, my music, my art, and my poetry. Definately a fantastic poem.
mee-mee SILVER said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 3:47 pm
mee-mee SILVER, Orlando, Florida
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"we all have dreams. but always remember with that dream comes a star. trust in yourself, believe in who you are. with nothing but confidence you will go far."
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yeah. ur right. and i guess thats why i like it so much, because i can relate to it. this was a good write hannah keep it up! and good luck to all poets, and writters.
mee-mee SILVER said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 3:45 pm
mee-mee SILVER, Orlando, Florida
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i like this. you're right. it does have a little ring to it. you did great.
connellys said...
on Oct. 8 2009 at 6:35 pm
I enjoyed reading this sonnet because I believe that it can relate to almost everyone wo reads it. At one point everyone is confused and does not know what to do, and they wish that they can figure out what to do and solve the problem. This piece also had a great flow to it. The way the words fit together was incredible. When you said "like a change is coming" it shows how someone easily knows that something is going to happen, whether it is good or bad, but they don't know how to deal with it. The way you describe the way you feel, in a way I am reminded of a journal entry. It was written in a way that someone might write to show their feelings when they are writing in their journal after something happened. When you say, "I can't say what I'm feeling, I'm not quite sure whats wrong," I relate to that, because I, too, have felt confused and I didn't even know why I felt that way. You did an excellent job creating this, and I hope you keep writing.
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 8 2009 at 11:48 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Nice poem its has a really great flow to it
Laura_A. GOLD said...
on Oct. 8 2009 at 10:11 am
Laura_A. GOLD, Etowah, Tennessee
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this is a beautiful poem i love it!!! amazing job :) kudos my friend kudos!
Inkspired PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 5:26 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

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This is a really nice poem, like you say, it has a nice ring to it, and very well written. Like cross.fire said, I think everyone can relate to it. Well done!
cross.fire BRONZE said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 4:58 pm
cross.fire BRONZE, Monroe, Louisiana
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How many times have I felt this? It's awesome to know I'm not the only one.