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You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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on Jan. 4 2018 at 12:37 pm
Julianna.S GOLD, Tirana, Other
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Very well written piece! I look forward to more work from you. Pls return the favour and check my work out when you get a chance! XOXO

so good .......

Amazing poem. I relate so much

Fantastic poem,very nice

on Dec. 10 2017 at 2:24 am
InkStainedFingertips, Belfast, Other
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A bird sitting on a tree is never afraid of the branch breaking, because her trust is not in the branch but on it's own wings," - Unknown.

I love your writing style and I can really relate to this at the minute.

olala said...
on Nov. 28 2017 at 3:24 pm
olala, Baytown, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
I love me

eyes cant sparkle

olala said...
on Nov. 28 2017 at 3:23 pm
olala, Baytown, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
I love me

don't worry about other people

Mickeyyy said...
on Nov. 6 2017 at 9:42 am
Mickeyyy,
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Amazing poem. I relate so much to this.

Princess boo said...
on Nov. 1 2017 at 6:20 pm
It inspires me

on Oct. 17 2017 at 2:18 pm
Breezette DIAMOND, Uniontown, Arkansas
84 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every Time I even think of you, all those bad memories just fade away, 'cause your smile's enough, you're enough...

I no joke am about to cry. Like UGHHHh

-_- said...
on Apr. 7 2017 at 4:56 pm
-_-, New York City, New York
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Had the same experience multiple times.

on Apr. 4 2017 at 9:39 pm
manasisoman SILVER, Hillsborough, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments
This is written so well! Keep up the good work!

torito said...
on Apr. 3 2017 at 12:18 pm
Can anyone please write me sonnet poem I'm having a really hard time with it

on Mar. 17 2017 at 9:20 am
EvalynnHeather GOLD, Clemmons, North Carolina
16 articles 4 photos 64 comments
This is so good!!

r.afiah SILVER said...
on Feb. 22 2017 at 8:08 am
r.afiah SILVER, Dubai, Other
5 articles 2 photos 1 comment
Most relatable thing I've read all week!!

on Feb. 16 2017 at 9:39 am
DelightfulDysfunction SILVER, Edison , New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Who are you? Answer; you are who you are in this given moment. Label-less. Limitless. Remember that from this day forward.”
― Connor Franta, A Work in Progress

I can totally relate to this poem...Love it.

on Jan. 26 2017 at 6:08 pm
Bunny137 BRONZE, Germantown, Maryland
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Don't worry about failures, worry about the chances you miss when you don't even try."






















~Jack Canfield

I love this poem so much keep writing.

JennaLuvzYou said...
on Jan. 11 2017 at 7:20 pm
JennaLuvzYou, Los Angels, California
0 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Gotta love yourself for who you are. Just be you."

Sorry change my screen name

JennaLuvzYou said...
on Jan. 10 2017 at 6:25 pm
JennaLuvzYou, Los Angels, California
0 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Gotta love yourself for who you are. Just be you."

Love poem write more

JennaLuvzYou said...
on Jan. 10 2017 at 5:53 pm
JennaLuvzYou, Los Angels, California
0 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Gotta love yourself for who you are. Just be you."

I agree!! Love it ;)