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'Nature'

February 20, 2011
By MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'


Glowing green eyes flicked open in the dark. She stepped slowly out of the brush. The moon reflected back on her silky black fur. Picking up speed, she walked over the border ignoring the reeking sent of the other wolf pack. Her followers stopped and snarled at the scent line knowing this was trouble; yet she walked on, head low and into the other pack’s forest. They fallowed reluctantly.
Water trickled down the trees as if they were sweating, the ground was moist under foot causing the followers to stumble; this didn’t bother her as she spread her toes and stayed aloft. She kept walking. Soon the smell of water was even greater and the roaring sound of water throwing its self-down the waterfall presented itself. The followers slowed as the roaring grew, afraid that they were going to have to go straight into the clearing. She kept walking.
Trees suddenly fell away to reveal the large empty clearing up against the mountain. None of the other pack was in sight. She kept walking; a reckless smile crept across her face. The followers shrank back but soon fallowed and looked to see beaten pathways in the rock that lead up into the many areas where the trees and rocks had grown together to make dens above the ground. She kept walking with no sign of stopping. Silently she climbed one of the pathways behind the waterfall; the pathway extended through the waterfall so anyone could see. Walking through the waterfall she sat on the rock, her wet fur glistening in the cold moon’s gaze. She looked down at her audience: four nervous followers looking around anxiously. She looked at the moon again. Then started her song.
A mournful howl sounded in the air and echoed across the universe, waking the pack. A howl so sad it has made people cry, a howl so angry it has chased away lions, a howl so caring it’s made the lonely feel loved, a howl so smooth the night carried it across the island and across the world. A howl that only people who knew her would hear it. A howl that could only belong to ‘Nature.’


The author's comments:
this wolf is a main character of one of books that I'm writing

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on Aug. 3 2011 at 3:13 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

Thanks :) this is the same wolf as in The Call

on Aug. 3 2011 at 3:12 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

Over 100 veiws!! :)

on Aug. 3 2011 at 2:26 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
0 articles 0 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~
~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~
~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than
a distant memory.~

Wow!

I thought this was awesome. I was instantly drawn into the story and I could picture this in my head.  Marvelous job!


on Jul. 31 2011 at 11:12 am
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

Thanks :) the lead wolf Nature is also in my short article: The Call if you want to check it out. Thanks again (:

on Jul. 30 2011 at 7:11 pm
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
6 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See, we don't really care who you are;
Everyone is capable of looking up and wishing on a star.
So catch it, so contagious, this day-dreamer's disease,
And hope can be your sword, slaying darkness with belief."

"Sanctuary"- Paradise Fears

The descriptions were lovely and overall I enjoyed this a lot! :) There were some typos, but those can easily be fixed. I would love to see something more of this!

on Jul. 11 2011 at 9:13 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 231 comments

Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

indeed @__@

on Jul. 10 2011 at 10:49 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

:) i like that image (: and its true twisting plots are some of the best

on Jul. 9 2011 at 11:54 am
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 231 comments

Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

the best authors in history were masters at the twisted plot. change directions like the wind, grasshopper, and you shall find a multitude of fans who will follow you like kites. ^___^

on Jul. 8 2011 at 2:27 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

that is so true

on Jul. 8 2011 at 1:11 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

That's very intriguing.  Thanks for giving some background!

on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:50 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i think the best writing comes from being bored or random thoughts but that's  my opinion

on Jul. 8 2011 at 10:02 am
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

here's the background for the story: there is an island near Mane that isn't on any map or ratar because it is constantly moving.  It once was only one wolf pack but as the island and pack grew the pack split apart.  Now the packs are almost constantly at war.  It's rare though to have a pack attack Nature's pack because she and her mate, Buck who she fell in love with when she was trapped in America and unable to get back to the island, win every battle. .... thats all the details i remember that have to do with this clip

on Jul. 8 2011 at 9:56 am
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

I was bored in studyhall and in a writing mood so i started writing but didn't really know what was going to happen

on Jul. 7 2011 at 11:16 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

This is a beautiful descriptive short story.  You should really expand upon this!

on Jul. 7 2011 at 10:58 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i love how u made me think that the wolf was a girl what's your book cinflict? I love this good job five stars

on Jul. 5 2011 at 8:43 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

ya i find them very intriguing and misunderstood, i know that they can be dangerous and everything but i can't help but find them majestically fierce ... this i know is not one of my betterly plotted articles since it starts off in one direction and ends in another

on Jul. 2 2011 at 2:35 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 231 comments

Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

you really love wolves, don't you? i don't mean to say that scornfuly--they are beautiful creatures. your writing shows that you understand them almost better than people.