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Dark angle: Star

August 8, 2011
By flamestar BRONZE, Fredericksburg, Virginia
flamestar BRONZE, Fredericksburg, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 15 comments

"It's so cold." A small, scared voice whispered

Alaska's head whipped up and demands, "Who are you?"

"Help!", the pitiful voice says again, "It's so cold and dark. I don't like the dark."

She looks around her small cottage room, it's dimly lit with light only coming from the cracks in the wall leading to the outdoors.

"It's not that dark."

"Help.... Oh no. He's coming! Help me please!" the voice wailed

"Alie! Alie!" Alaska exclaimed jumping to her feet remembering her little sister's voice at last. "Hang on Alie, I'll find you!"

"Hurry! I don't think I can..."


No answer

"Alie! I will find you!" Alaska exclaimed as a red star appeared behind her bangs and was burned into skin.

The author's comments:
I just started this a couple of days ago. this is all i have of it. I hope you enjoy it. I might trun it into a seris.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Aug. 25 2011 at 9:38 pm
flamestar BRONZE, Fredericksburg, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 15 comments

i will so commet o urs. justgive me the names.

the and &quote are quotaion marks

on Aug. 15 2011 at 4:14 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 769 comments
it was very good and i cant wait for more! but i do agree with Eno-Bladez, what is with the quote thing? It is poping up with veryones stories. And if you could, i need more feedback on my novels. thanks! :)(:

on Aug. 13 2011 at 12:26 pm
Eno_Bladez GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
16 articles 1 photo 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
it'll be okay, if it's not okay it's not over.

cool! but what's with the &quot thing?