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Opulence MAG

May 1, 2008
By AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Life it too short to let you matter.


I’ve been watching him for days now. When he leaves his house to go to school, I’m the one carefully tailing him, switching cars every day to make myself look less suspicious. If he ever sneaks out of his second-story room, I’ll be the one silently watching from a nearby tree. In class when he turns, feeling eyes on the back of his head, I’m the one who sent the hair on the back of his neck up on end. I am the girl whose shadow is always slightly overlapping his.

Being assigned to watch him almost makes me
feel like I’m not a stalker. Though I’m only 17, I’m a full-fledged member of the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. I’ve been with them since the ­tender age of five. It’s my home. Being an orphan, my office is also my permanent residence, the couch a fold-out bed. There are many others like me: no family. A lot of us are loners and haven’t chosen this route for ourselves.

I’m a tracker. I have been for years and some might say that I am the best at not being the best. In other words, I’m great at being invisible. Or at not being noticed. It’s not as hard as the others in the organization think. Being young and female is good, since most we track are young. Seeing me around younger people – my age, actually – doesn’t raise alarm bells. It helps that I’m cute. With a small frame, light hazel eyes, and short blond hair that curls under my chin, I don’t appear threatening. Of course, my ­organization-funded training doesn’t back that theory.

Soon I won’t be tracking down others with the power. They are finally going to give me an apprentice. After years of mastering everything I’ve been taught, they see my potential. That’s not to say I know everything. Even with my extended life I won’t be able to learn all the things I want to. If only this annoying boy would show the signs. It’s been almost a week. If he doesn’t show soon, they’ll reassign me. That much longer until I get my apprentice.

So here I am, sipping a latté and waiting for the Target to leave for school. I have been put in all of his classes in case something happens there, though I graduated high school years ago. Private tutors sped things up. With no family or personal ties, I had lots of time to devote to my studies. Martial arts black belts. Twelve languages, not including English. Everything a girl needs for a serious career in the agency. Such positions of power are not handed out easily. You must prove yourself many times over.

The Target and I have never spoken, but I know a lot about him. His file told me some, but after watching him for only a few days, I feel confident in saying that I know things no one else does. Not just the obvious, either. He resents his father and is protective of his mother, which makes me suspect the father is less than faithful. He smiles often but doesn’t make a lot of eye contact. He usually only speaks when spoken to. Although he has many friends, he isn’t close with any of them. The Target is observant, a watcher. This leads me to believe we would get along if he shows any promise.

I look down at my watch, then back at his house a few blocks away. The Target is late, which means I’ll be late too. Today my ride is a shiny black sports car, not out of place in this suburb full of midlife-crisis men. I turn on the engine impatiently. I’m fiddling with the radio when I hear something. I don’t feel any immediate danger, and I know to trust those feelings. But I ­also know that something is off.

Just as I am about to get out of the car and pretend to look in the trunk, the passenger door opens. I look up in surprise as the Target slides into the seat next to me. I grin, quite pleased by this turn of events. This is definitely a good sign. Perhaps intuition is strong in him. That would be good for my apprentice to have, complementary. I could handle having to deal with that.

“Hello, Lenna. Why have you been following me for a week now?” the Target asks lightly, conversationally, his first words ever said in my direction.

Ah, one of my many aliases. The organization set it up so that whenever I’m on a case, I get a new name, past, and present. It’s very powerful. The organization can basically do anything it needs; it has people everywhere imaginable. I’m just one of many, though there aren’t that many at the top, as I am. They don’t trust many to be trackers. Or to be apprentices. All of the full members have the power, though we control others to get things done.

My smile deepens as I say in my authoritative, professional voice, “My real name is Jade. I am a witch of the moon and a tracker for the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. You are also a witch. We would like to formally welcome you into the organization as my apprentice. Here is my card for verification.”

Jade Wordsworth
Tracker for O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E
Official Political Understanding Lending ­Everyone ­Navigation for Co-Existing Ethereals
Office hours: 8 a.m.-3 p.m. Mon-Sat
Phone: 555-5555
Proud league of witches of the sun and moon.
Worldwide.

“What do you mean ‘moon and sun’? Or ‘tracker’?” he asks, still looking at my card like it’s going to ­disappear.

“Types of magic. Moon is all about spells, the sun is more potion-based, though each type of witchcraft involves the other somehow. As a tracker, I find people like you and I bring them to O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. Every witch must register, train, and become a member by law. In fact, the organization is like a government targeted toward witches,” I explain with a smile, loving the fact that this time I get to teach the newbie.

“Magic? Seriously?” he asks, eyes wide, meeting mine. They are large, yellow, and catlike.

I click a button on my left, automatically locking the doors. I put the car into drive, pulling out onto the road. As an afterthought I add as a courtesy, “I think you had better come with me.” .



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AquaGem SILVER said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 11:22 pm
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Life it too short to let you matter.

Hey everyone! I wanted to take a moment to thank you for all your comments and reads. It seems like forever since I wrote this and I'm so surprised it's still getting attention. Thank you for all the feedback both negative and positive. I'm still writing and will always strive to improve my work and perfect my voice. I wish all of you the best and good luck!

on Nov. 5 2011 at 1:29 pm
Emilyourstruly BRONZE, Spring Grove, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

i Really like this story. thank you very much. it was great!

on Nov. 3 2011 at 3:23 pm
harrypotter143, Uxbridge, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Since everybody is an individual, nobody can be you. You are unique. No one can tell you how to use your time. It is yours. Your life is your own. You mold it. You make it.

~ Eleanor Roosevelt ♥*

hahaha, that's okay ! (:

on Nov. 3 2011 at 3:23 pm
harrypotter143, Uxbridge, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Since everybody is an individual, nobody can be you. You are unique. No one can tell you how to use your time. It is yours. Your life is your own. You mold it. You make it.

~ Eleanor Roosevelt ♥*

Okay, you're right. I'm sorry, I didn't mean to make it a big deal. Opulence could've been better written and you were just being constructive.

KCayla GOLD said...
on Oct. 31 2011 at 6:17 am
KCayla GOLD, Stillwater, New York
12 articles 2 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I brought a cupcake, and I brought Apollo" - My Best friend, implying that I was like Apollo :D

oops i meant for the comment below. sorry my bad.

KCayla GOLD said...
on Oct. 31 2011 at 6:16 am
KCayla GOLD, Stillwater, New York
12 articles 2 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I brought a cupcake, and I brought Apollo" - My Best friend, implying that I was like Apollo :D

that's not nice!!!!!!

Naomi518 GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2011 at 2:23 pm
Naomi518 GOLD, Windsor, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light" ~Albus Dumbledore

yay! HP fans unite! :)

on Oct. 28 2011 at 12:48 pm
harrypotter143, Uxbridge, Other
0 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Since everybody is an individual, nobody can be you. You are unique. No one can tell you how to use your time. It is yours. Your life is your own. You mold it. You make it.

~ Eleanor Roosevelt ♥*

oops, that was supposed to be a reply comment post :$

on Oct. 28 2011 at 12:47 pm
harrypotter143, Uxbridge, Other
0 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Since everybody is an individual, nobody can be you. You are unique. No one can tell you how to use your time. It is yours. Your life is your own. You mold it. You make it.

~ Eleanor Roosevelt ♥*

oh my gosh, that's so funny! photography, HP, and writing are my LIFE. (: i will totally check out your stuff! thanks !

on Oct. 28 2011 at 12:46 pm
harrypotter143, Uxbridge, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Since everybody is an individual, nobody can be you. You are unique. No one can tell you how to use your time. It is yours. Your life is your own. You mold it. You make it.

~ Eleanor Roosevelt ♥*

i get that you're trying to be constructive with your critisism, but it was really rude how you stated it. i thought it was a good story. a little confusing, yes, and it couldve been a bit more clearer, but you dont have to be so mean. the author was young, so they probably didnt have much writing experience.

on Oct. 28 2011 at 12:45 pm
harrypotter143, Uxbridge, Other
0 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Since everybody is an individual, nobody can be you. You are unique. No one can tell you how to use your time. It is yours. Your life is your own. You mold it. You make it.

~ Eleanor Roosevelt ♥*

oh my gosh, that's so funny! photography, HP, and writing are my LIFE. (: i will totally check out your stuff! thanks !

Naomi518 GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 9:40 pm
Naomi518 GOLD, Windsor, Connecticut
11 articles 15 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light" ~Albus Dumbledore

I saw your user name and decided to click on your name and we like the EXACT same things! HP, photography, writing!

I think you should take a look at my photography and stories and poms I posted on here...thanks! :D

oh, and go like my facebook page "that awkward moment when you forget your remembrall"


Naomi518 GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 9:38 pm
Naomi518 GOLD, Windsor, Connecticut
11 articles 15 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light" ~Albus Dumbledore

I totally understand that you're tring to help this author out, but don't you think asking "are you thirteen, and experiencing a minor hormonal imbalance?" is just a tad rude? you can say you didn't like it, without the name-calling.

on Oct. 26 2011 at 4:47 pm
spiritiris BRONZE, Blacksburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Writing a story is like driving through the fog. You can only see as far as your headlights, but you can get the whole way that way."
~E. L. Doctorow

Is this based somewhat on the Gallagher Girls series?

on Oct. 26 2011 at 4:44 pm
spiritiris BRONZE, Blacksburg, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing a story is like driving through the fog. You can only see as far as your headlights, but you can get the whole way that way."
~E. L. Doctorow

At first I thought she was a stalker, but now I realize.....

on Oct. 26 2011 at 3:55 pm
tr3bl3grrl SILVER, Lincoln, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"Fascinating. I am being possessed by unspeakable evil." --Tweek, Avalon #7
OR... "THE HUNKY-DORY THING ZAPPED ME!!" --Trunko, Ugly Doll Show.

Awesome! I love it! There are little grammatical errors, and there is a wonderfull budding story! You could take this far, if you find a publisher. Go O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E.!!!

on Oct. 26 2011 at 1:00 pm
harrypotter143, Uxbridge, Other
0 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Since everybody is an individual, nobody can be you. You are unique. No one can tell you how to use your time. It is yours. Your life is your own. You mold it. You make it.

~ Eleanor Roosevelt ♥*

i get that you're trying to be constructive with your critisism, but it was really rude how you stated it. i thought it was a good story. a little confusing, yes, and it couldve been a bit more clearer, but you dont have to be so mean. the author was young, so they probably didnt have much writing experience.

KCayla GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 6:02 am
KCayla GOLD, Stillwater, New York
12 articles 2 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I brought a cupcake, and I brought Apollo" - My Best friend, implying that I was like Apollo :D

I liked the agency part ,but when it got to the part of witchcraft I got confused. If you do continue to write this story, which I think you should, in my opinion, leave out the witchcraft thing. Stick with the main topic of the story. :D

on Oct. 21 2011 at 7:35 pm
Victor_Hagar SILVER, Dublin, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"It's always important to give your arguments impact." Fallout 3, Strength Bobble-head.

You know, you're right; I am being a little rude. But I don't do it out of spite, but out of critique, because if everybody said, "Gee willikers your story is really good," then the author wouldn't get anything out of it. This is TeenInk, we've got to help each other, not pat each other on the back when we write total poop.

Inkfan SILVER said...
on Oct. 17 2011 at 8:58 pm
Inkfan SILVER, Memphis, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Age is irrelevant, because time is just a measurement!

That's exactly what I was about to post.  

It's like the singers and song-writers who get awards every years...GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A CHANCE!  

It isn't even that great!