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Amelia's Cure

February 4, 2013
By freedomwriter98 BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
freedomwriter98 BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
You can either swim to the shore of possibilities; or drown in a sea of what-if's ~ Myself<3


The most beautiful smile I ever saw, was the smile which belonged to my best friend, Amelia. Although it was something she rarely did, when she smiled, it was breathtaking.

Her perfectly plumped lips would form a crescent moon shape over her pearly white teeth, but what captivated me when Amelia smiled, was her eyes.They sparkled like a thousand stars crept into her soul.

That's what they are right? Windows to the soul? It wasn't long after I met her that her sparkle died.

She no longer laughed or smiled. She was gone. My Amelia was replaced by a dark and morose soul.

It was like a disease that quickly ate away at her humanity.

That's when it hit me. I would stop it. I would bring back my Amelia.

I would be, Amelia's cure.


The author's comments:
This was more of a blurb for the book I'm working on called Amelia's Cure. It came to me when I was alone and just flowed onto a blank piece of paper and here it is. Amelia's Cure.

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on Feb. 10 2013 at 12:32 pm
sweetangel4life GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;What&#039;s in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet&quot;. Romeo and Juliet ( Quote Act II, Sc. II).<br /> <br /> &quot;Let them eat cake.&quot;<br /> Marie Antoinette

thanks a bunch :)

on Feb. 9 2013 at 6:12 pm
freedomwriter98 BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
You can either swim to the shore of possibilities; or drown in a sea of what-if&#039;s ~ Myself&lt;3

Thank you so much:) As I said, Its a blurb for a book I'm writing called Amelia's Cure:) I'll be sure to check out your writings!!

on Feb. 8 2013 at 11:37 am
sweetangel4life GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;What&#039;s in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet&quot;. Romeo and Juliet ( Quote Act II, Sc. II).<br /> <br /> &quot;Let them eat cake.&quot;<br /> Marie Antoinette

i really like this! I hope you write more. i want to know what made amilia so depressed. its very simple, but powerful all at once, the words really flow together. its so OUTSTANDING. :) check out some of my work maybe?  keep writing :)