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If I said I love you...

September 17, 2009
By LeighAnn Wolle BRONZE, Springfield, Illinois
LeighAnn Wolle BRONZE, Springfield, Illinois
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If I told you I loved you?
Would you say it too?
Or would I be alone.
Trapped in a Taylor Swift tone Would there be a love story,
or is there no such glory.
Will there be a force,
or no white horse?
If I said I love you,
Would we be through????


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on Jun. 20 2010 at 1:44 pm
My.Heart.Is.Yours BRONZE, L.A, California
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Favorite Quote:
I don't know who invented high heels, but all women owe him a lot.
-Marilyn Monroe

Aww, This Is Really Cutee(:

on May. 29 2010 at 11:06 am
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

lol this is cuuuutteee

 


on Apr. 16 2010 at 8:59 am
thats.about.it. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
I was the kid next door's imaginary friend. -Emo Phillips

aww, this is cute!

on Apr. 15 2010 at 3:07 am
Lost4Ever SILVER, Patna, Other
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its a really sweet poem...i love it..

on Apr. 4 2010 at 7:50 pm
Basketball4everr GOLD, Smithtown, New York
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i like the poem a lot- c if you could add more too it; it would make the poem stronger

on Mar. 24 2010 at 6:02 pm
imnotjaye SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
"We live in an age when unnecessary things are our only necessities."
Oscar Wilde
Irish dramatist, novelist, & poet (1854 - 1900)

cute.. rly :) but i think ur rhymin 4 tha sake of it... poems dont need to rhyme, but rly gdgd start

on Feb. 8 2010 at 6:29 pm
JohnnyDeppLover123 DIAMOND, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Be not afraid of greatness: some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them.
William Shakespeare

Ha ha ha that was funny and great!!! Nice job...awesome job!!! (with a hint of humor!)

on Jan. 17 2010 at 12:02 pm
flare556 BRONZE, Fultonville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
I like pie!

lol this is ironic! I decided to look at your artical because I wanted to hear something bueatifull and yet reflected how I feel at this moment, And thats exactailly what I got after reading your astonishing peice! Keep up the good work and Thank you! XDD

MOGLEY BRONZE said...
on Nov. 12 2009 at 7:02 pm
MOGLEY BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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I loved it:)) You did amazing and im a huge fan of Taylor Swift so i love how you put her in it! Keep up the good work:)_

on Nov. 8 2009 at 9:02 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

this was really good. i like how you tied Taylor Swift in it. we all wonder if the relationship will end when we tell that person i love you. this should be in the poetry section.

on Oct. 30 2009 at 6:40 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Very good. Great job!

Keep up the great work! ;)

heimana said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 4:29 pm
I think the poem is good. You might want to take the advice of adorabiblegirl and move this piece into poetry. I liked how you tied the poem into the Taylor Swift song like in the line " Trapped in a Taylor Swift tone." I found that funny because all of her songs are about break ups or make ups, and that was the whole purpose of this poem. I also liked how you were able to have some of Taylor Swift's song titles rhyme with other lines. Like in the line, "Will there be a force or no White Horse" Over-all the only thing you really need to change is moving this piece into the poem section. Great job though!

emily23 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 3:34 pm
emily23 BRONZE, Solon, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
Every story has an end, but in life every end is just a new beginning.

lol thats mean

emily23 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 9:51 pm
emily23 BRONZE, Solon, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
Every story has an end, but in life every end is just a new beginning.

shouldn't this be in poetry