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March 22, 2011
By LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE, Lafayette, Louisiana
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"I have many injuries. It is better not to talk about them." ~ Natalia Ma

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I write you poems and let you read my writing. Nothing really jumps out and grabs your attention, you say. Need I jump and grab you, pulling you back down to earth? Gravity is a liar. It will never keep you on the ground once you develop wings. Sometimes I sit and daze off and dream. Of you, of course. You don't know it, but I want your hand to accidentally brush against mine. And stay there. You think we're friends. But we never talk. I try to make something of you to hate. Something so I can let go of your jacket so you can go back to where there is no gravity. Do you lie in bed and dream as you daze off or are you staring at me? I don't think you know it but silently i want you to notice me. You sit there with your pretty girlfriend. She's not me. She’s happy. I watch the salt roll down my pale cheeks in the mirror of your apartment. You invited me over. But you’re not here. You get home and you sit there, on your bed. You’re quiet. You don’t say a word and I fell complied to pry the words out of you. But I don’t because I want you to tell me on your own. You stare off into space and I wipe my eyes with the back of my sleeve. The sleeve I wear my heart on for you. Remember that time you told me nothing grabbed your attention? Well, it wasn’t up for grabs.

© Alissa H., Double Oak, TX

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LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 9:26 am
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE, Lafayette, Louisiana
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"I have many injuries. It is better not to talk about them." ~ Natalia Ma

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Thank you! ....And,the train of thought has officially left the station of action. haha :)
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 9:18 am
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

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Great paragraph!  I love the train of though.  Just make sure to capitalize your 'I' in 'silently i want you to notice me.'  Good job!
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 9:04 am
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE, Lafayette, Louisiana
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Yes,I'm currently working on a novel. I write lots of short stories and I write for my school's newspaper and for an online public newsletter sometimes.But writing about love is my passion!
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 9:03 am
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE, Lafayette, Louisiana
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Thank you!!!
starbucks_queen BRONZE said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 8:48 am
starbucks_queen BRONZE, Belmont, New Hampshire
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I rly like it!!!! :) Seriously, it's rly good! I know someone else said this, but it's true, it's like you wrote this straight from your heart! Jw, do you write stories and stuff? Keep up the good work! :D
hopelovepain said...
on Jun. 26 2011 at 1:25 pm
hopelovepain, Maplewood, New Jersey
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I like this - you make connections like a real train of thought. I think it's really more of a cross-genre piece.. nice, though! 
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE said...
on Jun. 17 2011 at 10:05 am
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE, Lafayette, Louisiana
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Thanks :)                 
Shadow878 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2011 at 8:28 am
Shadow878 GOLD, Marion, Indiana
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Prettey good i like the wording it's kinda unique compared to most writings i see
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 10:28 am
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE, Lafayette, Louisiana
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I learned both as a young child,but I take lots and lots of ballet classes in French. But thanks!
MollyDoubleU BRONZE said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 10:25 am
MollyDoubleU BRONZE, Minooka, Illinois
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Don't apologize! Haha I think that's pretty amazing that you are able to write in another language that you aren't as fluent in. :D
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 10:06 am
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE, Lafayette, Louisiana
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I am French speaking more than English,so sometimes I stumble.... :( Sorry!
MollyDoubleU BRONZE said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 9:25 am
MollyDoubleU BRONZE, Minooka, Illinois
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The last three sentences gave me goosebumps! I loved this piece. I loved the title too. You had only a few spelling errors, about one or two, but it didn't hinder your writing. Very good work :)
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE said...
on May. 27 2011 at 5:17 pm
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE, Lafayette, Louisiana
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It was.Thanks to you both!
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on May. 27 2011 at 5:13 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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seems like this was written straight from your soul and rooted in true feeling. i liked it a lot :) the ending had me thinking fer a while there
sa4m said...
on May. 13 2011 at 3:02 pm
This is so true.....