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Reunited

December 14, 2012
By Anonymous

It was noon when I caught a whiff of him.
But maybe..it was..a dream.
Or my imagination.
Or maybe it was something that reminded me of him?
A painter with a canvas?
The scrisp fall breezes that he loves?
But I know... in my heart... I saw him.
For a hint of a moment.
I walked on, love in my heart was replaced by doubt.
"Four years, you think he'd return?", I scolded myself.
Then, there it was.
I was walking to Cafe Du Monde when I felt it:The surge in my heart.
He was here... I could feel it.
I ignored myself and walked on.
I was so blinded by thought that I didn't notice the tall figure that bumped into me.
We both apoligized at the same time.
Then I saw it.
His face.
Aged perfectly and his body: a miracle of perfection.
Air struggled into my lungs as the shock filled me.
The surge continued until it pained me.
Finally I breathed in.
He studied me.
I look young, but I've been blessed with womanly features.
He knew.He remembered.Gasped. Then smiled.
I stared.
The love returned,boiled wanting to be released but wasn't welcome yet.
Suspense took over.
We stared.
Daring each other
to open our mouths.


The author's comments:
Love has patience.

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mella said...
on Dec. 28 2012 at 12:57 pm
Thank you so much, that's exactly what I was trying to do. I'm very talented but I sometimes second guess myself, I just hope one day I become the famous writer I want to be at such a young age. I want to be very inspirational one day.

on Dec. 27 2012 at 10:20 pm
carynlee10134 BRONZE, Knoxville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Whether you think you can or think you can't--you're right."

I liked the way you kept the reader engaged, and you used very beautiful imagery! It somewhat made me think back to a moment in a classic movie when he sees her, but neither have the courage to say anything. I think this piece was beautiful and very well done.

Mella PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 26 2012 at 9:42 pm
Mella PLATINUM, Natchitoches, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
" All the World's A stage, and all the men and women merely players." - Shakespeare's "All the Worlds A Stage" poem.

Thank you so much! Sometimes I make mistakes when typing too fast.I'm happy you liked it because I always try to make my work soul capturing. I'm only in highschool so I'm still working on it. Hopefully if I keep this up I can get into NOCCA(performing arts)

on Dec. 25 2012 at 11:46 pm
In_Love_with_Writing GOLD, Easton, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

I was immediately enveloped into the story with the description in the beginning. Nice job with that! If you fixed those grammatical errors, this would definitely be a piece to beat. (BTW, that ending sort of shocked me with its forwardness :) )