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The Vampire Detective

July 10, 2009
By Ceneteros2804 PLATINUM, Griffith, Other
Ceneteros2804 PLATINUM, Griffith, Other
20 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Great spirits have always found violent opposition from mediocre minds.' Albert Einstein

'Why write about reality, we all know how that story ends' Me


He sat up at his desk and yawned. Midday. He had been working over seventy-two hours into this case. Murder. Murder most foul. It was always murder most foul these days. His name was Lucas Revenant. He was a Private Detective, hired by people in the Magical Community who wanted mysteries solved. He thought vampires got a bad rap, seeing as most vampires now drank blood that was donated to blood banks and that they only needed about two glasses a day. He smiled a breakthrough. He had found what he had wanted.

“Jonathan Lycaeon” he repeated the word on the page and found himself with the final piece he needed. He had no accent, he had lived in so many places for so many years that his voice had turned in a global accent. One that anyone could understand. The door opened and a girl stepped in. She was tall and thin. With blue eyes and black hair. She wore a rain coat with a hood. He stood he wore a black suit and tie with a white shirt. He had emerald green eyes and black hair with pale skin and wore black Fedora hat with a pinched front.

“Lucas Revenant?” she asked. He casually nodded. “My name is Melody Piper and I’m here to ask you for a favour.

“A favour, hmm…Well, no since I’m presently employed on a case” he replied.

“Tsch, I’m not asking…I am ordering” she growled.

“I’m not intimidated…surprisingly” he sarcastically muttered.

“Ah, Detective” muttered a small man as he entered. Korean, definitely Korean. He had a small beard and no hair. He wore a suit with no tie and brandished a samurai sword.

“Who the hell are you!” barked the girl.

“I am Yu” he answered.

“You are me?”

“No I am Mi” shouted a tall man with a machine gun. Before he could fire Detective Revenant grabbed her arm and jumped out the floor to ceiling window. He pulled a device out with his left hand as he held her with his right. He pressed a button and his office exploded.

“Joy” he muttered sarcastically as they landed.

“Detective” welcomed Jonathon Lycaeon as they landed. He was a medium sized man of medium build. He tapped his silver walking cane and guards grabbed the detective and the girl, bound them and locked them in the car’s boot, which had an air supplying machine.

“Oh great” Melody muttered. “Kidnapped.”

“Actually this is great” the detective laughed.

“How so?” Melody asked.

“Because now I can do this” he said and pulled a gun from his sleeve. He had somehow cut his bindings and that look he had was not one of peaceful escape…

The author's comments:
This was written as a salute to vampire detectives everywhere...Jokes aside you should read my other work Shimazu!

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on Dec. 16 2009 at 7:11 pm
Ceneteros2804 PLATINUM, Griffith, Other
20 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Great spirits have always found violent opposition from mediocre minds.' Albert Einstein

'Why write about reality, we all know how that story ends' Me

Yeah well a twist on this months flavour. I'm into crime and stuff and vampires are the new black at the moment so...the idea was born.

mari14 SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 7:07 pm
mari14 SILVER, MI, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Love or oxygen, you need both to live and pump your heart." -By Mari

vampires and detectives...both are favortie subjects of mine I love your story

on Oct. 28 2009 at 2:26 am
Ceneteros2804 PLATINUM, Griffith, Other
20 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Great spirits have always found violent opposition from mediocre minds.' Albert Einstein

'Why write about reality, we all know how that story ends' Me

Thanks Mel! I received your oher comment too! It is a possibility.

on Oct. 28 2009 at 2:14 am
MelodyofAthena BRONZE, Springfield Lakes, Other
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OK Ceneteros, seriously this rocked! I have read all the parts and I cannot wait for the next one! Vampires forever!!!!

on Sep. 22 2009 at 5:05 pm
Onceknown BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Courage is doing what your afraid to do
There can be no courage unless your scared
-Eddie Rickerbacker

Can't wait to read them!

on Sep. 22 2009 at 3:25 am
Ceneteros2804 PLATINUM, Griffith, Other
20 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Great spirits have always found violent opposition from mediocre minds.' Albert Einstein

'Why write about reality, we all know how that story ends' Me

Thanks Lector, I am submitting part two tonight and part three soon after. I was waiting for someone to show some intrest first though.

on Sep. 21 2009 at 6:10 pm
Onceknown BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Courage is doing what your afraid to do
There can be no courage unless your scared
-Eddie Rickerbacker

So good!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE write more about this story, its off to a great start!