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Picture is Coming Alive

April 12, 2012
By InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
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InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
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Stay Strong! <3

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Oh please, paint some color into my black and white world? I'm dying to know reality' s definition. I want to uncover life's precious treasures. I need to find out how to live this rare remarkable journey we call life. I want to jump into reality's experience. I plead to feel the rush of taking risks. I wish on taking chances that may lead me some where new every time. I must admit these things scary me just a bit though. So dear painter, before I run into life. Do your art piece (me) a favor? Use your handy dandy brush to draw over my lines of sorrow. Replace them with lines of happiness. Erase my errors, make them flawless. Undue my regrets , change it to lessons learned. Wipe off my tears and place a smile on my face. That is all I ask for master . So farewell my painter, this art work doesn't want to just sit on wall and watch life pass me by. It wants to live reality once and for all. So goodbye creator !

Sincerely, your art piece that doesn't want to belong on wall.

© Jena S., Cameron, WI

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It began with a word and turn into this :) hope you like it!
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Maria said...
on Jun. 13 2012 at 10:52 pm
I like how the pic matched your description..very creative!!
DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 13 2012 at 12:22 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

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After reading this for a second time...i came to the realization that this was awesome. I liked your begginging for sentences it painted an accurate picture of how life is. Great Message. My only suggstion for you is to write more of these type of stories. Keep it UP FWIN!!!!!
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE said...
on May. 16 2012 at 9:27 pm
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
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Gracias Gracias mi amigo :)
sam_101 BRONZE said...
on May. 15 2012 at 12:28 am
sam_101 BRONZE, ......................, Other
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el megnifico 
Kiki said...
on May. 13 2012 at 12:36 am
I like it alot , I like it!
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE said...
on May. 11 2012 at 6:23 pm
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
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Thank you FWIN:)
DanielM. said...
on May. 11 2012 at 5:01 pm
That was magnificent. Very original...
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 26 2012 at 10:37 pm
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
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Stay Strong! &lt;3

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Thank you so much! :)
Under-the-Rain GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2012 at 10:30 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)<br /> Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

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Awesome!!!!

your poem is very orginal :)

InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2012 at 1:40 am
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
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Thank you so much!:) and I'll check out some your work!
C.K.Snow SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2012 at 6:16 pm
C.K.Snow SILVER, Morden, Other
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This was very unique! I really enjoyed this piece. Definately on of my favourites.

Could you check out some of my work? Thanks!

InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2012 at 12:22 pm
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
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Thank you so much! :D yeah I noticed the errors a little too late to change them but oh well. I'm glad you found it creative and unquie cause that's what I was going for! :)
haven_94 said...
on Apr. 20 2012 at 12:22 pm
your welcome
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2012 at 12:19 pm
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
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I'm glad you liked it! :D

 

InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2012 at 12:18 pm
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
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haha yeah I noticed that little to late so I was like 'oh well' but thanks so much for taking the time to comment . I apreciate it  ! :)
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2012 at 12:15 pm
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
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Thank you! :)
Haven_94 said...
on Apr. 20 2012 at 9:07 am
Haven_94, Walkerville, Michigan
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it doesnt matter how many breathes you took but how many moments took your breathe away

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this was really cool
JustJalissa SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2012 at 7:16 am
JustJalissa SILVER, Washington, Indiana
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I really like it. :) I noticed some errors, but only grammatical or spelling. Overall, it's very creative and unique. Kudos to you. :D
Skrone SILVER said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 10:43 pm
Skrone SILVER, Leawood, Kansas
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Jafar, &quot;Ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for me.&quot;

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It was a good poem, but there were a few spelling errors, undue shoud have been undo and I believe you meant "scare me" not "scary me" but overall good :D
somerandomperson GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 10:41 pm
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
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To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland<br /> forever alone

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I love this and how you compared life to a painting