Gone. | Teen Ink


October 3, 2012
By Head-In-The-Clouds GOLD, Bath, Other
Head-In-The-Clouds GOLD, Bath, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I wish I was a glow worm, a glow worm's never glum.'Cos how can you be grumpy, when the sun shines out your bum!

Walking through the battle field all I could see was burning trees and dead bodies. Then I saw what I most dreaded; my mother lying there, blood streaming down her head, her lifeless eyes staring up at me in despair. As the agony hit me I noticed my father next to her, their hands inches apart. Now I am alone.

The sorrow knocked me hard. I sat down next to parents and wept. Suddenly a sharp stabbing pain raced through my body and I felt dizzy and faint.
I woke up, aliens surrounded me. The humans are gone.

The author's comments:
A short piece I thought might confuse readers!

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on Feb. 13 2013 at 2:57 am
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that's why they call it the present"

HaHa, yes confusing. you've suceeded. but also very creative and original. cool work!