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A Midnight Drive

March 6, 2019
By lilyw123 BRONZE, Defiance, Ohio
lilyw123 BRONZE, Defiance, Ohio
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The writing titled “A Midnight Drive”, written by Jordi2112, talks about missed opportunity. The author’s writing left me feeling bored. I read the article “A Midnight Drive” and I didn’t think it had a strong plot. I was bored when I read this because I felt like it lacked detail. However, I could relate to one of the quotes, “STOP COPYING ME!” I have two siblings and I’ve heard this phrase a lot. It is a challenge to go anywhere with all of us and not have someone fight about something. There’s another quote, “I was just messing with him.” This sounds familiar, because this is what my siblings or I would say to our parents to get out of trouble. I felt like she jumped from one part to another without giving too much detail.


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I felt it lacked detail.


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