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The Darkest Forest

January 25, 2011
By TheEpicAuthor BRONZE, Dnver, Colorado
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TheEpicAuthor BRONZE, Dnver, Colorado
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For everytime you lose something you gain something else<br /> For everytime you gain something you lose something else<br /> Its all about youre outlook of life <br /> Regret or Rejoice

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Beth is stuck in the forest, she is in a fight with Aaron. Will she win this fight or be dragged back to there hide out to be killed like the rest of her family?

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emilybwrites SILVER said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 1:59 pm
emilybwrites SILVER, Villa Hills, Kentucky
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last night i lay in bed, looking up at the stars and i thought to myself, where the heck is the ceiling?

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this was very well written! keep it up. please check out my new poem "the others" i really want everyone to tell me what they think of it please check it out!!!
PJD17 SILVER said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 5:56 pm
PJD17 SILVER, Belleville, Illinois
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Very interesting plot  i look forward to reading more of your work  could you please check out and comment on my story  Manso's Shame
Timekeeper DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 30 2011 at 1:18 am
Timekeeper DIAMOND, Cary, North Carolina
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&quot;A guy walks up to me and asks &#039;What&#039;s Punk?&#039;. So I kick over a garbage can and say &#039;That&#039;s punk!&#039;. So he kicks over a garbage can and says &#039;That&#039;s Punk&#039;?, and I say &#039;No that&#039;s trendy&#039;!&quot;- Billie Joe Armstrong, Green Day

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Sweet, it's always good to hear from fans. Would you mind posting a comment on the page so we can discuss it there? I don't want to take away from your excellent novel here.
TheEpicAuthor BRONZE said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 10:55 pm
TheEpicAuthor BRONZE, Dnver, Colorado
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For everytime you lose something you gain something else<br /> For everytime you gain something you lose something else<br /> Its all about youre outlook of life <br /> Regret or Rejoice

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I've read SuperNOVA it was amazing
TheEpicAuthor BRONZE said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 10:54 pm
TheEpicAuthor BRONZE, Dnver, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
For everytime you lose something you gain something else<br /> For everytime you gain something you lose something else<br /> Its all about youre outlook of life <br /> Regret or Rejoice

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Thanks this is just the rough draft i have to go back and review parts of it but now i know what to look for.
rainbowwaffles BRONZE said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 9:58 pm
rainbowwaffles BRONZE, Stony Brook, New York
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The plotline is good and it has a lot of potential. :) Just one thing: Make sure you're using the correct punctuation in your dialogue and the right version of the word "your." Sometimes you need to use "you're" if you're trying to say "you are." Otherwise, this is very good. Keep working. Also, maybe you could check out my novel, The Formation? It's in the Realistic Fiction section. Thanks!
Timekeeper DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 11:31 am
Timekeeper DIAMOND, Cary, North Carolina
62 articles 0 photos 569 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A guy walks up to me and asks &#039;What&#039;s Punk?&#039;. So I kick over a garbage can and say &#039;That&#039;s punk!&#039;. So he kicks over a garbage can and says &#039;That&#039;s Punk&#039;?, and I say &#039;No that&#039;s trendy&#039;!&quot;- Billie Joe Armstrong, Green Day

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The title felt kind of generic, and although I like the plot a lot, the chapters are very short and I feel it would work better as a short story. I look forward to more of you work, though!

 

Would you mind checking out my novel SuperNOVA and leaving your thoughts on it? Thanks :D