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The Devil's Rose

November 16, 2011
By AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
12 articles 7 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
Music is a higher revelation from wisdom and philosophy. ~Ludwig Von Beethoven


Summary:

After a fight with her mother, Jerico Silverstone's life drastically changes. A man wearing a white suit comes to Jerico and she discovers a startling truth about herself and her parents. As an attempt to woo 17 year old Jerico, the man leaves her a single rose. Who will Jerico turn to and what will she do with her life?


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on Jun. 15 2016 at 11:39 am
Bladewolf17 SILVER, Kc, Kansas
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please tell us the name when you are done.

on Jun. 15 2016 at 11:34 am
Bladewolf17 SILVER, Kc, Kansas
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Please do a sequel, I would love it if you did.

on Sep. 15 2012 at 1:30 am
AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
12 articles 7 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
Music is a higher revelation from wisdom and philosophy. ~Ludwig Von Beethoven

Thank you! Working on a sequel right now :) Really hope you all like it.

on Sep. 13 2012 at 5:43 pm
BluBirdWriter13, Nowhere, Kentucky
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I LOVED IT! You should really do a sequel I would lovee it and I'm sure others will too.

on Feb. 24 2012 at 4:54 am
Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
32 articles 31 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep." -Robert Frost

wow! I love the descriptive writing, and the dialogue is great (I Find that the hardest part) I agree with timekeeper, Jericho as a girl's name is super cool and creative! *****!

on Feb. 14 2012 at 3:15 pm
marchbutterfly GOLD, Orange, New Jersey
18 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When you play God, you get screwed."

I've only red a few chapters but already I can tell your a great writer. Your characters are so well developed.

on Jan. 18 2012 at 6:22 pm
Kvothe28 SILVER, Temecula, California
5 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Excuse me while I prepare my impromptu remarks. -Winston Churchill

Tell it like it is, not how it was. -Jonathan

Break it down like a fine English double-gun. -R. Bitoni

Your writing is very detailed, and I forgot I was reading after awhile. Also, Jerico's relationships with her parents and Reno were well crafted.

on Jan. 18 2012 at 5:17 pm
Timekeeper DIAMOND, Cary, North Carolina
62 articles 0 photos 569 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A guy walks up to me and asks 'What's Punk?'. So I kick over a garbage can and say 'That's punk!'. So he kicks over a garbage can and says 'That's Punk'?, and I say 'No that's trendy'!"- Billie Joe Armstrong, Green Day

I'm definitely appreciating the longer, more fleshed out chapters compared to your earlier novel. I like the creativity of using Jerico as a girl's name, and I enjoyed the recurring red imagery. It was very thematic and it helped create a cohesive work.

on Jan. 6 2012 at 10:06 pm
ZombieViking SILVER, Streamwood, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Beware; For I am fearless, and therefore powerful.

Very good you are a really talented writer

on Dec. 4 2011 at 3:19 pm
OMG i cant believe no one has commented on this!! great story!! keep writing!