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Gifted

February 20, 2012
By Cryptogirl, Untracable, Colorado
Cryptogirl, Untracable, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
I have not failed, I have just found 100,000 other ways that... Don't work. ~ Thomas Alva Edison


Summary:

When one thinks of an alternate universe, their first impression isn't much like Tamara's world. In her world, they have these things called "Schools" that people lock us up in if we have magical powers. Usually, no one gets out of a school until they're eighteen and usually they don't get out with their magic.
Tamara and her friend Briana have been going to one of these schools since they were both two. Briana has shown brilliant magic in the past but Tamara can't do a simple levitation spell with out crumpling to the floor.
But when she's saved by a mysterious boy named L and brought to the Rebellion, she learns that she'll have to learn how to use her magic if she wants to live.


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Hanny said...
on Feb. 28 2012 at 9:45 am
Only got thru chap 1 (but I will come back for the rest). Great concept. Could use some editing (read aloud to catch repetition, action scenes flow better with short sentences, etc.). Main character reads true but bad guy needs some work--he feels a little flat Overall, I'll watch for more of Crypto's stuff