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A letter to love
You told me you need me
That was such a lie
I gave you the best that I could
You swear to be true
Don't make me laugh
You're to greedy just to be with one man
Just give me some space
That's the least you can do
Give me some time to think things through
You swore that you love me
Now is that the truth?
I need to see some proof
Will you even miss me?
I don't think you care
You just like all the things I give you my dear
I think it's time for me to leave
Our show must not go on
Farwell love
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the ending stopped alittle too suddenly, but from reading comments i can tell this is a work in progress. itll be an amzing song someday though, i already have a rhythm for it just by reading...
If I were you, I would add some more about what she did that you are writing about - and when you do, add concrete imagery and not so much of the narrator's feelings - if you describe the scene clearly, the reader will feel that he/she is actually in the scene, and will be able to relate. Show, don't tell.
Great! I posted something new also, and i'm just waiting for it to go on (it's been 2 weeks, so that should be any day).
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