wow, this is a nice poem. I'd love to hear it spoken instead of reading it off a page, I feel like there's more to this poem than just the words. I can see you have potential in writing, there's no question to that, but I wonder how much experience you've had? You sound young, full of emotion, and that's key in writing. The hardest part of writing a poem is delivering it the right way. your poems are heartbreakers that many teens can relate to, but that's a little bit of the problem. there are so many poems out there exactly like yours sending the same message, and a poet should reach out to give others a new perspective through words. I love your style, I really do, and would like to see you write something of that nature. Keep writing :)

Whoa, this is a really good emotional poem. Almost made me shed a tear there. I love the meaning and rhyming (I love couplets too!). I hope you feel better soon <3