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Ocean

August 27, 2021
By EvelyneWrites PLATINUM, Arlington, Virginia
EvelyneWrites PLATINUM, Arlington, Virginia
21 articles 0 photos 19 comments

We

Are the 

Clear blue sea

Each touch propelling

The next, the

Circles of

Wave

And we

Are each small

Droplets, not enough

To move all

On our 

Own

We own

The movement

Together, and we will rise

Rise to a swell

A tsunami 

If only

We

Stand 

Together like

A wall held fast 

With mortar, unbreakable

A single drop can

Only do a 

Small

Amount, a

Single drop can 

Bend, but bond and we

Are strong and 

We are the

Sea


The author's comments:

This piece is meant to look like ocean waves. It is a reminder to the reader that bonding together creates strength, and one action can propell a movement.


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on Jan. 9 at 10:43 pm
Ela2611 PLATINUM, Vancouver, Columbia
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Hey @EvelyneWrites , this really great poem. It is very well-written ~ giving me a sense of tranquility.

on Sep. 28 2021 at 2:23 pm
EvelyneWrites PLATINUM, Arlington, Virginia
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Thank you so much @anthrwatcher! I love the ocean lol

on Sep. 27 2021 at 5:44 pm
anthrwatcher BRONZE, Roslyn, New York
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I love your style of writing! The format is really cool, and your words flow nicely together, really making it feel like ocean waves. The meaning behind it is also really nice; I've heard the expression "a drop in the ocean" used typically in a negative way, so your poem was refreshing, and an interesting way to look at the comparison between our actions and their effects!