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i am a song

December 9, 2009
By poetic_natural GOLD, Jefferson, Wisconsin
poetic_natural GOLD, Jefferson, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you know you're in love because you can't fall asleep, because reality is finally better than your dreams"

I am a song.
I am constantly flowing in different directions, with unexpected turns and emotions.
Each word expresses my feelings. Sometimes my lyrics are graceful and elegant. Other times i am just a never ending song that people wish would end.
I am a song.
my chorus is sometimes out of range that can feel like a piercing piece of broken glass.
but other times my pitch is beautiful and fills the room with great smitten.

I am a song
My ending is most important because most people don't make it that far. they stop half way.
I am a song
sometimes i am a never ending song that people wish would end. I'm just a song with a few cracks and bends. But i never promised that I'd have a happy end.

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L.T.A SILVER said...
on Aug. 27 2010 at 7:41 pm
L.T.A SILVER, Hammond, Indiana
7 articles 1 photo 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
All of the animals except for man know that the principle business of life is to enjoy it.-- Samuel Butler

I liked it. The ending kinda makes me feel like your hiding some big secret and I like that 

Miseltoe GOLD said...
on May. 30 2010 at 6:25 pm
Miseltoe GOLD, Boneville, Georgia
15 articles 2 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm a loser and I love to lose. Each time I lose its different, it teaches me something else... but winning loses its glamour after the first few times. so I love to lose

hmmm. it feels like its missing a stanza maybe the unhappy end or sumthing it just needs more of a bang.... but very eexpressive and a gain nice imagery =)