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Two weeks

February 6, 2010
By Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."


THE DISTANCE AND THE TIMING BETWEEN US IS PRETTY LONG, MUSIC IS WHAT BRINGS HAPPINESS BACK TO ME, THEREFORE EVERTIME I PLAY A DIFFERENT SONG
US BEING TOGETHER AGAIN TO ME RIGHT NWO IS A DREAM
ITS SO HARD AND COMPLICATED, BUT THATS ONLY HOW IT SEEM
EVERTHING REMINDS ME OF YOU, THE RAIN, THE CLOCK, COLDNESS, AND BURING HOT
WHEN YOU'RE NOT THERE WHEN I NEED YOU THE MOST, ITS LIKE IN THE HEART IVE BEEN SHOT
I DONT EVER WANNA BE WITHOUT YOU, DONT ASK ME WHY NOT
TELL ME YOU LOVE ME TILL I BREATH YOUR LOVE
TILL I FEEL IT THROUGH MY LUNGS
NO LONGER CAN MY WORDS EXPRESS!
IM GOING TO STOP, BUT ILL GO ON IN MY HEART
I LOVE YOU, FOREVER,
I LOVE YOU BECUASE YOURE MINE, AND IM YOURS.. TILL YOU GIVE UP.. WOULD YOU EVER?



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BurnHem said...
on Nov. 26 2010 at 11:52 am

You're welcome!

You must have missed one of my comments on "He laughs when I cry and it hurts"


Shahed GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2010 at 4:39 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Aww thanks! That really means a lot to me! :) Im glad you liked it!

BurnHem said...
on Nov. 22 2010 at 4:25 pm
You are remarkable. I really like this poem a lot. It's complex and figurative enough to make you reread it over and over and over again!, but somehow communicative enough to express true pure feelings coming from the heart straight to paper!

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 6:04 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

your welcome

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 5:42 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Aww thanks! And I'll :)

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 2:21 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

I love this, you are an amazing poet. btw- can you check out some of my stuff?

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 2:12 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Thank you! :)

on Jun. 21 2010 at 8:58 am
Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
25 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fall in love or fall in hate; Get inspired or be depressed; Ace a test or flunk a class; Make babies or make art; Speak the truth or lie and cheat; Dance on tables or sit in the corner; Life is divine chaos. Embrace it. Breathe. And enjoy the ride...

Beautiful poemm :)

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 12:52 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I'm glad you feel my poems in a very nice way, and thanks I write becuase I like writing I express myself through it!

Shadows said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 8:20 am
You have beautiful poetry! Amazing! It touches my heart so deep to hear your poems. They express every feeling you can have and i know what those feelings are. Your work gives me goosebumps!! Keep going! You'll make lots of money! :))

Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 16 2010 at 1:53 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

thnxx, lil dolo ;)

lil dolo said...
on May. 16 2010 at 1:51 pm
aww..ilove this peom..good job

Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 13 2010 at 8:40 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

This poem was meant for one person, and will always be! Im glad you like it!

lol Ill check out your work asap! ;)


on May. 13 2010 at 3:56 pm
Tiffanie_ SILVER, Sedro-woolley, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not tell me the sky is the limit. Because there are footprints on the moon

Hmm this poem reminds me of a lost love. it seems like you want to be with whoever but its too far away. i like it!

 

p.s comments on my other works? haha


Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 4:53 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

close enough.. Ill.. thanks for the advice!

on Mar. 3 2010 at 9:17 am
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

It sounds to me like you've lost some Lover. Or love. Try not to think of love when it hurts to much, think of life and who you'll become, and who you are by your self without them.:)

Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 8:14 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

thank you! .. yea I know ;)

jephte15 said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 8:12 pm
i actually like reading you work and you know how much i hate reading lol :)

Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 9:11 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

thank you.. I will :)

Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 9:10 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

thank you so much!!