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do you care for me

March 11, 2010
By poemlover BRONZE, Hadley, New York
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do you care for me
i've got to know
tell me please.
am i worth your time?
when i smile at you
is it a crime?
do you care for me?
tell me please
be my eyes
help me see.
please tell me
do you care for me.
when we kissed
i couldn't breath
but when you said thanks
i felt relieved
tell me please
do you care for me.
i have to know
so i can go on
with my life
and if you don't,
i need to deal with
the strife.
so tell me please
do you care for me.

© Samantha A., Southbury, CT

The author's comments:
this poem is about someone that i had thought i was in a relationship with but then i didnt know if it was real so i asked him to tell me.
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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 2 2011 at 6:28 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

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I like it but maybe it could have been improved without the rhyme scheme. Good context, though, and I like the basis of it a lot. Keep writitng!

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