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Surrounded by...

September 20, 2010
By NothingButAli GOLD, Silver Lake, Indiana
NothingButAli GOLD, Silver Lake, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best things in life are better left unseen. that's why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream"- Anonymous


Surrounded by
flower fields
and fireflies
holding hands
and soft whispers
on that
little dirt road



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on Oct. 14 2010 at 1:10 pm
NothingButAli GOLD, Silver Lake, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best things in life are better left unseen. that's why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream"- Anonymous

thank you very much (:

on Oct. 2 2010 at 7:45 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

This is quite a wonderful poem. Those simple, seven lines were all that were needed to create a beautiful picture. You succeeded in creating something beautiful, so I applaud you.