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Pure Place, Gentle Embrace

October 7, 2010
By I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible. " ~ Cadet Maxim
that's an awesome quote learn it, love it, live by it.

Everything I dream of,
Falls on the shore,
Of a beautiful place,
With everything I love and adore,
The pure white sand,
In between my toes,
Running through my hand,
This is a place that no one knows,
A moment not traded,
For anything,
Not contemplated,
A peaceful place,
It is an unopened place of wonder,
No footprints to trace,
An isolated area,
Which only I can observe,
The ocean noises,
Calm my every nerve,
The riptide drags everything back to the sea,
The sheltering wind,
Clutching me,
Waves clashing upon the bank,
An amazing sound,
The freshest breath I'll ever take,
A hand print left to erode in the sand,
The biggest mistake,
I could ever make,
Is to leave this uncharted land.

The author's comments:
That one place you think about before you go to sleep sometimes, when you are lying on your bed staring at the ceiling or with your eyes closed. That one calming thought that helps you drift to sleep. That one pure place with no bad things. Your idea of a perfect place. That is my perfect place... what's is your perfect place?

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