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Star Analogy

November 2, 2008
By carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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If friends were stars,
The one closest to you is the North Star: always there, dependable, and bright.
The friends that are good for you that you should have are the stars that make up the constellations: mapping out the events of your life.
The friends you seem to always pick are shooting stars: amazing one second and gone the next.



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on Aug. 9 2010 at 10:38 am
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

creative analogy :) keep writing, Mel oh and check out some of my work, i would love to hear what you think.

on Jun. 29 2010 at 10:05 am
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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this is so true and relatable, i loved it! it reminds me of that quote "friends are like stars: you don't always see them, but you always know theyre there" check out my work if you want:)

on Mar. 19 2010 at 5:28 pm
celloizmylife PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Around here, however, we don&#039;t look backwards for very long.<br /> We keep moving forward, opening up new doors and doing new things, because we&#039;re curious.....And curiosity keeps leading us down new paths.<br /> -Walt Disney

I can understand this and relate, but I don't think I have any constellations, and definitely not a North Star.

JaseC GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 1:12 am
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
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hey, i loved this.

i wrote a short story and i know you've read my stuff before and id like you to check it out and let me know.

on Sep. 1 2009 at 7:02 am
Morgan Lieberman BRONZE, Woodland Hills, California
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so true! most of us don't want to admit it, but yes you nailed it! great job :)

Batwoman GOLD said...
on May. 8 2009 at 12:04 am
Batwoman GOLD, Middlebury, Indiana
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That was so amazing it's how I feel about my friends.

on Apr. 20 2009 at 5:26 pm
sftbll92chic BRONZE, Winston - Salem, North Carolina
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i loved it! great job!=)

Bridie ELITE said...
on Mar. 5 2009 at 3:35 am
Bridie ELITE, Massapequa, New York
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Favorite Quote:
She can because she thinks she can.

The description of a friend that you used is original and I love that about your poems. I wrote about friendship once in 6th grade except I focused on the people who are'nt your friends instead. I applaued you on another job well done!