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what haunts me.....

March 25, 2015
By Realest.Feminist. BRONZE, Delmar,NY, New York
Realest.Feminist. BRONZE, Delmar,NY, New York
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"Reality is wrong. Dreams are for real."- Tupac Shakur


What haunts me……
What haunts me hasn't happened yet but it haunts me day and night, week after week.
Its name is age 23
                            ,34
                                   ,56
                                          ,78
,90
not just me everyone cause after age comes its brother death and old death the baseball player swings his bat and hits you in the head you fall,

You're out next thing you know you see darkness you're going without even saying goodbye are they mad at you do they miss you,hahaha you’ll never know will you.
What about your family when they go through this it lonely and cold muddy.
So I guess i'm not scared of age, the clockmaker, but of his big bro the baseball player.
Cause when you look back on it you really do care about the gray hairs,and the old folks homes or anything now you just want your family back.
You never know what you have until its gone.
”You're out”
 


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on Dec. 4 2016 at 12:17 am
ambivalent SILVER, West Bend, Wisconsin
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everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. the worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt. [sylvia plath]

The comparison of death to a baseball game I thought was really interesting. At first I didn't really get it - I thought that you were trying to make death seem less scary, but now I understand that it is more so showing that even the young and pure will need to face death sometime, the inevitability of death, more so. Very poignant, and defintely kept me thinking! Lovely job :)

on Jul. 26 2016 at 1:47 pm
Blackjack. GOLD, Suffolk, Virginia
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&quot;Take a lesson from &quot;the Greatest Man That Ever Lived,&quot; Austin Aries. The ambition and vision of one depends on how bad@ss they look in sunglasses.&quot; - Me, 2017<br /> <br /> &quot;Who is this Jose, and why is he always being denied?&quot; - Corey Graves, 2016

Real grim style of poetry. I like it! Cheers!

on Jul. 26 2016 at 10:45 am
YoungBeauty GOLD, Claremont, New Hampshire
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&quot; Beauty isn&#039;t about having pretty face. It&#039;s about having a pretty mind, a pretty heart, and a pretty soul&quot;

Prue Genius!

on Jul. 25 2016 at 8:06 pm
missfloetry SILVER, Forest Park, Illinois
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&quot;Don&#039;t mistake my kindness for weakness. I am kind to everyone, but when someone is unkind to me, weak is not what you are going to remember about me.&quot;<br /> -Al Capone, American Gangster

Brilliant!