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Shadows of a rainbow

March 6, 2009
By Jordan Wilson-Dalzell GOLD, Portola Valley, California
Jordan Wilson-Dalzell GOLD, Portola Valley, California
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Oh, if I could run free with the wild horses<br /> I'd run and I would keep going and never stop.<br /> Oh,if I could keen with my brothers the wolves<br /> I'd cry sorrow and call for the freedom we lost.<br /> <br /> <br /> If I could pick up my legs and just gallop away<br /> my footprints would be pounded in the earth <br /> eternal<br /> If I could hunt with my pack , coexist as one<br /> our cries would be recorded in a wild journal.<br /> <br /> <br /> Oh if I could race out my heart and challenge <br /> the wind<br /> Even if I lost ,my lose would be mine to own<br /> Oh, If I could speak the name of a word to feel <br /> its birthing roots<br /> If freedom were the word-then I am coming <br /> home.


droplets splatter on concrete earth,
and become seemingly one dimensional
puddles.

Arcs of color twist and spread out
piercing the glare of a thousand
sky tears.


I've always wondered- what color
is the shadow of the rainbow?

If you look behind the metallic hues
of bright color- what will you find?



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on Mar. 19 2009 at 5:22 am
smsilverwolf BRONZE, Ellicott City, Maryland
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The last two stanzas are your stongest- the flow of the first two is a little awkward in places. But otherwise, nice idea and interesting perspective.