Standing in the dark | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Ballad
  4. Standing in the dark

Standing in the dark

November 2, 2009
By Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
More by this author
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
15 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be" - unknown

View profile

I ‘m standing alone in the dark
Waiting for you to light the spark.
To ignite the flame,
You will have to take the blame.
No one will believe I was there,
You will start to shred and tear.
Black is dark and white is pure
You’re the disease and I’m the cure.


You’re standing there in the dark
Waiting for me to light the spark
I will never ignite the flame,
And who’s to say that I’m to blame
This is because you start to fear
In the dark I shed a tear
I’m not dark and you’re not pure
I’m not a disease, you’re never a cure.

© Garrett M., Port Angeles, WA

The author's comments:
this is a piece about racism as any form of dislike towards another person because they are different completely disgusts me.
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
who is she?
By Briauna Lassig SILVER
Park City, Utah
Briauna Lassig SILVER, Park City, Utah
6 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Change the Future
By Anonymous
Poetry
Caleb
By angel11 PLATINUM
Co Spgs, Colorado
angel11 PLATINUM, Co Spgs, Colorado
22 articles 0 photos 2 comments
View profile
Poetry
Docile Doll
By Bree.Jalique SILVER
Tracy, California
Bree.Jalique SILVER, Tracy, California
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments
View profile
Poetry
Love Is Everlasting
By universalc BRONZE
St. Louis, Missouri
universalc BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
Rely on no one but yourself.

View profile
Poetry
Ballad of a Hero
By InkBlogger SILVER
Ruston, Louisiana
InkBlogger SILVER, Ruston, Louisiana
8 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Shall we always study to obtain more of these things, and not sometimes to be content with less?&quot; - Henry David Thoreau, Walden<br /> <br /> &quot;A man who dares to waste one hour of time has not discovered the value of life.&quot; - Charles Darwin

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 23 comments.

WhingsOfAnOutcast BRONZE said...
on Sep. 24 2010 at 11:36 am
WhingsOfAnOutcast BRONZE, Victora, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A sincere artist tries to create something which is, in itself, a living thing.&quot;~Painter William Dobell

View profile
errr this comment my sis left......don't know why but sorry DX
WhingsOfAnOutcast BRONZE said...
on Sep. 24 2010 at 10:46 am
WhingsOfAnOutcast BRONZE, Victora, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A sincere artist tries to create something which is, in itself, a living thing.&quot;~Painter William Dobell

View profile
well I disagree with being racist but I mean the sad truth of it is that racist people view others like that
WhingsOfAnOutcast BRONZE said...
on Sep. 24 2010 at 10:09 am
WhingsOfAnOutcast BRONZE, Victora, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A sincere artist tries to create something which is, in itself, a living thing.&quot;~Painter William Dobell

View profile
I really like this. its different from alot of poems I've read. I didn't realize it was written from 2 different views at first though. I love it!
teenage_dirtbag said...
on Sep. 22 2010 at 3:31 am
i think your'e wrong. this is the best poem in the world.
Katherine93 GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 4:03 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
15 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be&quot; - unknown

View profile
thankyou! :)
Katherine93 GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 4:02 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
15 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be&quot; - unknown

View profile
thankyou! :)
KICK3593 PLATINUM said...
on May. 14 2010 at 5:01 pm
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
49 articles 0 photos 74 comments
View profile
Your poem is awfully bleak to the end. I don't know, I guess that your preface just disagrees a little with my ideas. I believe in a universal sort of prejudice. You can disagree, of course, but I mean, everyone's different! My philosophy is to be accepting but in another way not accepting. I guess accepting in a social way, and not accepting in an individualistic kind of way (And hence, I don't believe in marriage!).
Katherine93 GOLD said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 5:35 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
15 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be&quot; - unknown

View profile

thanks! I thought when i was writing it, that it would be good to try and be open - minded about what i was writing but i suppose i'm being quite biased against my own race here..... but at the end of the day, i see more racism coming from white people than black because idiotic people feel the need to share their nasty thoughts with me despite the warnings that i will hit them ... lol....

again thanks ;p

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 4:10 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.<br /> <br /> <br /> &ndash;Golly (Harriet The Spy)

View profile
I really like how this is from two prespectives, which took a bit of time to realize. Nice work!
Katherine93 GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 3:34 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
15 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be&quot; - unknown

View profile
Ummm... Just in case there is any confusion here, stanza one is from the perspective of a white person, whereas stanza two is from the perspective of a black person. Thought I'd shed some light on this.. :)
vampluv11 GOLD said...
on Feb. 8 2010 at 1:31 pm
vampluv11 GOLD, Saugerties, New York
10 articles 1 photo 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go ask Alice.

View profile
yesh, i get to reply after all this time! (thnx fer replying to mine, btw..)

i loved the line "Black is dark and white is pure

You’re the disease and I’m the cure."

i loved the whole thing!
Katherine93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 10:06 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
15 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be&quot; - unknown

View profile
any comments on how to improve would be fab thanks!
Katherine93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 3:28 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
15 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be&quot; - unknown

View profile
lol you make me laugh, frube!
Katherine93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 6:18 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
15 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be&quot; - unknown

View profile
computer is f****d up.....
Katherine93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 5:43 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
15 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be&quot; - unknown

View profile
ta, love you! xxx bum chum xxx
Katherine93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 5:43 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
15 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be&quot; - unknown

View profile
an that wasn't at 4:19 am this computer is f****d up >[
Katherine93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 5:42 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
15 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be&quot; - unknown

View profile
not at 4:20 am damn it!
DarkPhoenix BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 3:24 pm
DarkPhoenix BRONZE, Liverpool, Other
2 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Make love not war

View profile
Heyy, wow this is so good. I havent read any of your work in a while and so this just reminds me about how talented you are. Keep it up i cant wait to read more :D x
Katherine93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 4:20 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
15 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be&quot; - unknown

View profile
love that picture.....
Katherine93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 4:19 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
15 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be&quot; - unknown

View profile
oh i did NOT reply to your comment at 5:28 am- what a load of poo. >:(