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Elementary Love

October 20, 2010
By YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Every burden is a blessing


Girl in love,
falling for the wrong guy.
She ignores his flaws,
hopelessly lost in his eyes.

She gave him her fragile heart,
not knowing he would tear it apart.
He cradles it in the palms of his hands.
No strings attached,
he knew where they stand.

The chemistry between them,
slowly reach.
Her heart he holds,
he dare not breach.
She gets up out of her seat,
takes a breath and gave her speech.

The love they had,
was like no other.
He takes her hand and says,
we'll always love each other.



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on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:13 pm
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
26 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every burden is a blessing

Thank you jeepster (:

on May. 7 2011 at 10:25 pm
very cool....and true.....

on Apr. 12 2011 at 7:40 am
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
26 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every burden is a blessing

thank you teenage paradise (:

on Apr. 12 2011 at 7:39 am
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
26 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every burden is a blessing

thank you dark shadow (:

on Apr. 10 2011 at 1:36 pm
TeenageParadise_114, Cary, North Carolina
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this is so cuteee(:

Dark_ShAdow said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 9:25 am
This is really cute

on Mar. 22 2011 at 9:38 am
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
26 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every burden is a blessing

thank you for your commentary

RainFever224 said...
on Mar. 19 2011 at 10:42 am
RainFever224, Cary, North Carolina
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adorable poem

on Jan. 10 2011 at 8:12 am
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
26 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every burden is a blessing

thanks love (:

Sykesbaby414 said...
on Dec. 15 2010 at 9:10 am
Sykesbaby414, Holly Springs, North Carolina
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beautifully written babygirl (:

on Nov. 11 2010 at 8:20 am
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
26 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every burden is a blessing

why thank you (((:

on Nov. 11 2010 at 8:19 am
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
26 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every burden is a blessing

thanks (((:

on Nov. 11 2010 at 8:18 am
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
26 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every burden is a blessing

thanks (((:

on Nov. 11 2010 at 8:18 am
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
26 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every burden is a blessing

why thank you (:

nyah_nicole said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 8:09 am
nyah_nicole, Cleveland, Ohio
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i think your poem is very sweet !

Zyaire said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 8:00 am
Zyaire, Cleveland, Ohio
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this is a beautiful poem. ican relate

on Nov. 10 2010 at 1:57 pm
This poem is so cute and it explains the way that young live really is and has been for a long time

on Nov. 10 2010 at 1:54 pm
this poem is so cute and i love the way it explains young love

on Nov. 9 2010 at 8:15 am
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
26 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every burden is a blessing

thank you very much (:

on Nov. 9 2010 at 7:46 am
claire-baire BRONZE, Lafayette, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
you wouldn't have to get over me if you were still under me

AWWWWWW!!!! thats sooo cute!!!! i love it!