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So Perfect

July 15, 2011
By k.s.h. GOLD, Depauw, Indiana
k.s.h. GOLD, Depauw, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood and I--I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference.<br /> <br /> <br /> Robert Frost


She is so perfect,
so pretty.
They all worship
all that she is.
She takes up his room,
every bit.
He is all hers,
She is his.

I wish I could be her,
so flawless.
God has handcrafted
her kind.
He loves her
no matter what happens,
she’s perfectly polished
and shined.

There she is now,
walking past.
I wish she would notice
my care.
I can’t help but cry
when I see her.
The pain is just too strong
to bear.



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k.s.h. GOLD said...
on Sep. 5 2011 at 3:42 pm
k.s.h. GOLD, Depauw, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood and I--I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference.<br /> <br /> <br /> Robert Frost

It was so beautiful.  I loved the metaphors and similes you used.  Very creative.  And the last line was like, "BOOM!".

Wow.

Check out more of my stuff if you like.


on Aug. 27 2011 at 8:19 am
wordlover27 GOLD, Vancouver, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&lrm;&quot;For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness...&quot;<br /> -Audrey Hepburn

I can totally relate...it stinks when it seems that someone is prettier and more popular than you are... :/ Great job!

Could you check out my poem, "The Dance"?