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“Destroyed Love”

July 14, 2011
By EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Never Give Up, Never Back Down." - Anonymous


I think about her amazing lies….
The way she tells her lies flies. …

She destroyed my heart like a raven….
I’m already caved in….

My eyes water like the pure ocean….
My bodies destroyed with all these emotions….

Her voice filling my ears….
My body filling with fears….

Her cold heart like frozen breeze….
My heart feeling like broken seas. …

She screams like a banshee…..
My mind feeling trashy…..

Her language so aggressive…..
My soul feeling so depressive…

I walk away so disgusted…
My life so busted….

The author's comments:
This is an old poem I made as well, long ago. This express feelings of a character who's love one was just out to hurt him..

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on Jul. 31 2011 at 12:55 am
EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Never Give Up, Never Back Down." - Anonymous

Lol xDDD I am glad you had a laugh, it was meant for people to laugh.

wasps said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 12:14 am
wasps, Other
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Ha ha ha, this one is said yet makes me laugh :)