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A Brother's Love

January 31, 2012
By AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
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AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
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Protective, selfless & caring
Gifted, intelligent & loving
This is a brother's love
It's priceless
And there is never a moment of dullness
You always made me smile & grin
You were definitely more than just my twin
I knew you well and you knew me
I really hope that you can see
That you're always on my mind & in my heart
And even though we are apart
I know you'll be watching, guiding & leading
Because a brother's love is never fleeting

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem for my brother who passed away January 20th 2012. RIP Dameion. Words can not describe how much I miss you.
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AgentOrange789 GOLD said...
on Mar. 12 2012 at 1:06 am
AgentOrange789 GOLD, Friendswood, Texas
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&quot;It&#039;s a saying they have, that a man has a false heart in his mouth for the world to see, another in his breast to show to his special friends and his family, and the real one, the true one, the secret one, which is never known to anyone except to himself alone, hidden only God knows where.&quot;<br /> -James Clavell, &quot;Shogun&quot;

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Very nice! Reminds me of people who I owe a visit. 
dreamshaker said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 5:38 pm
dreamshaker, Clarkston, Michigan
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this was so sweet.

very powerful - i really enjoyed it.

Odile,OhOdile SILVER said...
on Feb. 28 2012 at 12:08 pm
Odile,OhOdile SILVER, Mumbai, Other
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I like it!!! :D
KateLA GOLD said...
on Feb. 26 2012 at 2:00 am
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
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I love this-I did a poem for my brother too! It's nice to be able to dedicate something to them, isn't it? :-)
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 24 2012 at 4:23 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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&lrm;&quot;I&rsquo;m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don&rsquo;t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world.&quot; - Beyonc&eacute;

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In the first and second lines, I could say that your adjectives are not that strong. And they don't seem to treat the third line well enough. If you know what I mean... Anyway, ont he sixth line, smile and grin is kind of redundant. Some of your words are kind of clique too. Anyway, I understand what you're trying to say and I hope you move on with the passing away of your brother. :) And, hey! I'm not ttrying to be mean with the criticism, by the way. Just something to let you know your strenght and weakness in writing. can't say I'm perfect though. Anyway, keep writing!!!
Let-it-breathe said...
on Feb. 23 2012 at 1:16 pm
Sorry about your loss. Great poem though
AlpsPuppy BRONZE said...
on Feb. 16 2012 at 6:06 pm
AlpsPuppy BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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All I can say is amazing and that is the truest thing in the world.