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About You

March 6, 2014
By Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments

You decorate your body with cuts and stain it red.
You burden your self with problems you've made up in your head.
You weep and pitch and say the world is mocking your despair.
You were too blind to notice but; I was there.

You say you're all alone in life, and block your eyes and ears.
I watch as people try to help but you drown them out with tears.
I see the pain you're going through; I truly understand.
But in the end you always push away my helping hand.

I see the mask you're wearing, like a coward in disguise.
Running from a monster deep-seated in your lies.
You say you hate yourself and everyone hates you.
I guess I am a nobody; a ghost; a person that's see-through.

I see a friend who's disappeared behind a selfish wall.
Blinded by lies the world has told her, deaf to my pleading calls.
I see a person wrapped up in themselves,dying for affection.
And one day you will; and not see, you had my full attention.


The author's comments:
I felt like all my poems showed only one side of the story. Here is what self-harm, does to the people around you.

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on Apr. 16 2014 at 12:25 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

This is amazingly good! Wow! True and fitting!

on Apr. 16 2014 at 12:16 pm
Promethean SILVER, Kanpur, Other
8 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
An eye for an eye will make the whole world blind....

very very constructive work. Good job mate. 

Harri SILVER said...
on Apr. 16 2014 at 12:11 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
Thank you so much. I understand what you mean about the last verse, but I don't know anyway yo fix it. Thank you again!

on Mar. 15 2014 at 10:17 pm
Kat_Poetry BRONZE, Neenah, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
"But without the dark, we would never see the stars"

I like this. I like this a lot. It reminds me of an issue I deal with myself. If I had to criticize on think I would say that the last stanza doesnt flow as well as the others. But I did really enjoy this poem, keep up the good work!

Harri SILVER said...
on Mar. 13 2014 at 6:48 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
Oh, so you hate it because you see what cutting does to others?

on Mar. 13 2014 at 12:17 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

Oh because I am a cutter. 

Harri SILVER said...
on Mar. 12 2014 at 6:13 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
Hate it? Why?

on Mar. 12 2014 at 5:36 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

Love and hate it... Wow...

Harri SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2014 at 4:17 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
Thank you so much! I actually didn't write this about myself...It is all fictional..(: 

on Mar. 10 2014 at 4:07 pm
dreamcatcher77 BRONZE, Congers, New York
4 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People change things go wrong but just remember life goes on"

WOW. THIS IS SO AMAZING! I know exacly what you're going through! I've written a poem similar to how you're feeling, wow so good! keep it up:))

on Mar. 10 2014 at 11:50 am
skydancer666 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
10 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
on my own i am clumsy ..... but on your shoulders i am free to be me

np Harri :)  

Harri SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2014 at 8:07 am
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
Thank you, Unique!! That is nice of you to say!

on Mar. 10 2014 at 7:57 am
skydancer666 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
10 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
on my own i am clumsy ..... but on your shoulders i am free to be me

i like the emotion you place in this , it shows what others cant see or dont want to see..... keep up the good work!