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Remembering Eu.

September 20, 2014
By Xena_Zionne GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
Xena_Zionne GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
16 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best.” -Marilyn Monroe

I can’t let you go.
Your stains upon my heart
Warm me then turn me cold.
I still see your face when I close my eyes.
It’s like the ghost of you is haunting my mind
I hope you still think of me as a friend
When we meet eye-to- eye
This rain that is falling will turn to
Steam and I’ll be calling your name
Through the other side of the smoke.
The good doors have closen and I’m
Trapped in this loneliness,  and I hope you’re feeling better
I hope you’ve got it together
I hope you’re in a better place until we close this space
And I see you face to face
And oh, oh
When I dream I remember everything
I wake up and my heart’s yearning tears
Are rolling to my sheets.
And when I’d cry you would look me in the eye
Your sad brown puppy eyes taking in my pain.
No. I can’t let you go; your love is stained upon my heart.
And yea.
Our plethora of memories have turned to a few, but still everyday
I dedicate an hour
Remembering You.

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This article has 2 comments.

on Sep. 29 2014 at 9:12 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Wow. This is amazing. Yu really do have such a talent. Your poem is so descritpive and has so much emtion and you; you just put yourself into it, when you wrote it. Your poem is wonderful. It's so sweet yet rather sad, but all in all, fantastic. You do have a talent; don't stop believing that. Thank you so much, for sharing this. 

on Sep. 29 2014 at 2:56 am
Creative-Writer BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
4 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
We know what we are, but know not what we may be. -William Shakespeare

This is fabulous! it holds a lot of emotion, and made me not want to stop reading.  I can just picture what is going on.  And your syntax is down right wonderful.  although you had a few fixable mistakes, this is perfect!!!  you should keep wrinting!