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Forgetting you

October 11, 2018
By Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
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Forgetting you

Your bittersweet kisses

Make me forget

The worse is gone

When I am with you, I'm at my highest

When you’re gone I feel my lowest

Loving you will kill me yet,

I can’t stop

I know having you stay is a hidden sin

But I think of you every day

Your smile entices me

Your eyes invite me

Your laugh excites me

Your cries break me

Hurting you was not planned, but loving you was

I wish I could take it back

Feel your touch

But you are my past

And someone else’s future

You are not mine

And I need to forget you


The author's comments:

This piece was inspired by my broken heart... 


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on Feb. 26 2019 at 10:23 am
Brookie-cookie BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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I love this and hoe deep it is. It really is so relatable and brings up many feeling. I would really appreciate it if you could check out my work aswell, because I am a new writer. Thank you!

on Feb. 8 2019 at 11:42 am
lydiagerges BRONZE, Franklin, Wisconsin
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i can't express how this writing makes me feel a certain way. I love it so much, you're writing voice is truly beautiful. it would mean the world to me if you could read my writing and give me any feedback!! xoxo

on Feb. 5 2019 at 1:40 pm
lindseypeoples BRONZE, Greenwood, Arkansas
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i love how this poem just flows... it isn't wrote in a way that is too pretty its fake. it is real and super good !

on Jan. 24 2019 at 7:40 am
iamcloudyeyes SILVER, Spokane Valley, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
we are like human beings
used to be before they became
too civilized to enjoy themselves
- Don Marquis, The Lesson of the Moth

It really be that way.
I feel for this on a whole level, if I am being serious.
Wonderfully written.

on Jan. 10 2019 at 10:37 am
Lilsis14567 BRONZE, Cohoes, New York
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Favorite Quote:
dont trust a perfect person and dont trust a song thats flawless

i know how you feel i have been through the same thing and it really hurts you in the end but stay strong

on Dec. 21 2018 at 4:10 pm
Sarahx15 PLATINUM, Brandon, South Dakota
22 articles 8 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Someday everything will make perfect sense. So, for now, laugh at the confusion, smile through the tears, and keep reminding yourself that everything happens for a reason." - Art Thomas

I've been there too. Stay strong!

on Dec. 14 2018 at 11:17 am
kristjanscott BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Atticus,he was real nice...."

"Most people are,sout,when you finally see them"

-To Kill A Mockingbird,HAPPER LEE

so deep

on Dec. 11 2018 at 7:12 pm
suga_yoongi_agustd SILVER, Marietta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
we fight each day, a never ending battle, life is the butcher, and we are the cattle

omg I know exactly how u feel

KarMoon BRONZE said...
on Nov. 30 2018 at 9:52 pm
KarMoon BRONZE, Culpeper, Virginia
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I have never experienced a heartbreak to this extent but I could truly feel your pain in this. So sorry you have to go through something like that. Hopefully things are better now. Love this.

8067 said...
on Oct. 17 2018 at 3:17 pm
8067, Bartlesville, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
shoot for the moon even if you miss you will land among the stars

wow thats really good

on Oct. 17 2018 at 9:15 am
Rhiannon_4 DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both.
- Native American proverb

Do not go gentle into that good night but rage, rage against the dying of the light.
- Dylan Thomas

What is past is past -- it is the present and the future that concern us.
- Hiawatha, founder of the Iroquois Confederacy

I'm so sorry this happened to you, I hope everything works out okay for you. Great job on this piece.