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Weaker
April 30, 2021
Hopes are crushed,
Future is burning.
Holding on to thin rope,
Still learning.
Will I ever find healing,
Or saftey somewhere.
Final stretch,
Go go go says my mind,
Race for the finish line.
Help me save me,
Before I sink,
Beneath the waves.
They say what doesn't kill you,
Makes you stronger,
But I'm weaker everyday.
© Brittany L., Wolfforth, TX
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This article has 5 comments.
LoversOrFighters SILVER said...
on May. 20 2022 at 1:21 pm
Wow! This poem is beautiful! No improvement needed
WolvesRain ELITE said...
on May. 11 2021 at 7:51 am
Thanks!
WolvesRain ELITE said...
on May. 4 2021 at 7:39 pm
I really appreciate all the comments, for a while there I thought my poems weren't any good.
SparrowSun ELITE said...
on May. 4 2021 at 2:27 pm
the poem by its self was really cool, again tho, the sidenote doesn't entirely match up, tho it doesn't feel so out of place. but ur a really good author anyhow.
i would also like to say: if nobody comments on your work for months and months and months, don't let it get to you. but i try, and lydiaq actively does. and she is an awesome person just doesn't know it.
i would also like to say: if nobody comments on your work for months and months and months, don't let it get to you. but i try, and lydiaq actively does. and she is an awesome person just doesn't know it.
This is about the feeling where you feel like the whole world has turned their backs on you and you feel there is nothing you can do reminding people to think about what you say.