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I.L.I.K.E.Y.O.U.

September 22, 2009
By KarchiD BRONZE, Clermont, Florida
KarchiD BRONZE, Clermont, Florida
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Words cannot describe the way one feels,
When falling head over heels,
Their mind-- spinning its wheels,
While all that’s left of reality peels,

I stare into your deep, brown eyes,
I feel as though they had been disguised,
For now, I see what I’ve never realized,
The truth behind all that I need inside,

There’s a word that always strikes a certain chord,
It’s a word to be said, from one’s very core,
But saying it anytime soon, would just be a chore,
Because it doesn’t hold enough meaning to me anymore,

Another word starts with an L, and ends with an E,
And the letters seem to fit together flawlessly,
Exactly how I picture it would be with you and me,
This word does not, however, have an O, or a V,

I is to L, just as I is to K and then unto E,
And Y, O, and U, go together effortlessly,
These are the words I dare to say to thee,
And the same words that I wish you’d say back to me.


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KarchiD BRONZE said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 7:07 pm
KarchiD BRONZE, Clermont, Florida
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Thank you so much, violetfaye! I'm so glad you like it. :) I hope others do as much as you. Feel free to see my other articles. Thanks again!

on Oct. 6 2009 at 1:32 pm
violetfaye BRONZE, London, Other
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I really like this! It's very unique and unexpected, and shows how 'i like you' can be just as good as 'i love you