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I HATE YOU!!!

September 28, 2009
By BrooklynnBlue BRONZE, Simi Valley, California
BrooklynnBlue BRONZE, Simi Valley, California
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I hate the way you look at me
I hate the way you dress

I hate the way your hair looks
I hate it when you say my name
I hate it when you play your silly game

I hadn't had a chance to say, the way I really feel
I hated the way you broke my heart.....



But I mostly hated that you did it through a text



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the ripper said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 1:59 pm
that is deep it really came from your heart

Like it i am glad someone speaks the truth its good to say what you need to say and not hold it in

XXHELLBOYZXX said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 1:59 pm
WONDERFUL POEM. KEEP THEM COMING

45 is raw said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 1:59 pm
i like it sound like someone was all and there feels

on Oct. 9 2009 at 1:58 pm
thats was so tight

Chihuahua said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 1:58 pm
you right... i hate people that end a relationship by text...

itzel said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 1:57 pm
its a great poem, but its not the best. it would of been better if you would of put more feelings and emotions in it.

NEFARIOUS said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 1:57 pm
COWARD! Who would hurt someone through a text. This is DEEP. Its amazing!

Nisha_92 said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 1:57 pm
I liked it is was cool

on Oct. 9 2009 at 1:57 pm
Holy gravioly, that's good/harsh

SNOOP said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 1:55 pm
Wow snap! snap! snap! snap!

on Oct. 9 2009 at 12:42 pm
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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ya it would of been better if you putyour mind in it and done it yourself!!

thats what people mean when you have a hand of a writer but i heard this before!!

on Oct. 8 2009 at 6:59 pm
ChelseyLynn BRONZE, Pueblo, Colorado
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Im pretty sure this was on a movie.

If your going to write it should be your own not just something youve heard. Really wow

TinyDaisy GOLD said...
on Oct. 8 2009 at 2:58 pm
TinyDaisy GOLD, Flat Rock, Michigan
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How original... not. I'd really like to see something on here that hasn't been written a hundred times by every teen in the country. What happened to beauty in poetry?

on Oct. 8 2009 at 2:54 pm
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't know what you got till it's gone."

This was really good until the last sentence

IRBFGW DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 8 2009 at 1:19 pm
IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
53 articles 1 photo 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hey, assbutt!" Supernatural, Castiel.

This is so amazing and powerful. BEAUTIFUL!

blouin said...
on Oct. 8 2009 at 12:18 pm
i understand wat your going threw i just went threw the same thing like 3 days ago thank you this poem helps me get threw the pain

Mizotron GOLD said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 9:03 pm
Mizotron GOLD, Ashburn, Virginia
12 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writing is not just something to do, its what I am, and what i feel i should be, and thats how it should feel when you know you want to be a writer.
~Kimberly Lynn

It was amazin! Keep writing and ill keep readin!

on Oct. 7 2009 at 5:15 pm
cheerchick4 SILVER, Beaumont, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
All is fair in love and war

That was an awesome poem!! I love the ending.

on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:47 pm
kennedy_rowzz SILVER, Sterling Heights, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we can never truly know who we are"-afi

This poem is great keep writing I would love to read more.

<3

on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:37 pm
This was ok untill u said, but i mostly hate that u did it through a text. It makes it sound like a juvenial relationship