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October 2, 2009
By gabigal SILVER, Conroe, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"everything has beauty in it, you just have to see it"

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Did you press your lips against mine?
Did you catch me when i fell?
Did you embrace my uncertainty?
Because i am shaking.

Did you feel love for the first time?
Did you look me in the eyes?
Did you see my soul deep down inside?
Or were you just an illusion?

© Julia R., Bethesda, MD

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love comes and goes so make memories and remember those who have come and gone in and out of your life
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gabigal SILVER said...
on Nov. 10 2009 at 12:24 pm
gabigal SILVER, Conroe, Texas
6 articles 12 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"everything has beauty in it, you just have to see it"

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thanks..i jus losst my love b/c i was uncertain of things and so he left...ha
alexisjo SILVER said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 5:28 pm
alexisjo SILVER, Roanoke, Texas
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fearless doesn't mean you're unafraid, it means you're terrified, but you jump anyway. <3

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I loved this poem so much! I loved when you said,

Did you embrace my uncertainty?

Because i am shaking.

That was my favorite part (: