Breath | Teen Ink


October 4, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

My heart beats faster
when you walk by,
A million times faster
and I can't breath.
I see the way you go
the way you breath
Your hair so shiney
mine dull
your eyes warm
mine cold
breathing in and out
Your mouth moves
mines still
and silent

The author's comments:
it is about a crush, and how you can compare yourself to the perfection of someone who you have a crush on

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on Jan. 1 2010 at 3:45 am
Arluanna PLATINUM, Broken Arrow, Oklahoma
31 articles 2 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Mwahahahahaha! Now you are mine, Lesley-Bird, finally, at last, in my... oh, drat, forgot it had wings...”

-Phil, the youngest Kalins Uzin

I loved this! very true, only thing is that you spelled 'breath' wrong, its supposed to be 'breathe'

but the point definitely comes across!