Danced | Teen Ink


October 5, 2009
By Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
45 articles 17 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
This too shall pass.

Forever we danced,
danced in the land of love.
Freer than anything else ever known.
Dancing along with the strong steady beating of out hearts
colliding and colapsing.

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on Feb. 10 2010 at 10:44 am
Aro_To_The_Heart PLATINUM, Mandeville, Louisiana
47 articles 7 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why is it that, as a culture, we are more comfortable seeing two men holding guns than hands?

-Ernest Gaines.

yet another short, yet powerful, piece of poetry. i like the imagery of hearts colliding and collapsing. it really adds that little spark of interest to start the flame. great work once again.