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This is what I need from you

October 27, 2009
By emily23 BRONZE, Solon, Maine
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emily23 BRONZE, Solon, Maine
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Every story has an end, but in life every end is just a new beginning.

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I want a guy, who, if I'm cold or upset will just come up behind me and wrap his arms around my waist to comfort me and know it's OK. I don't want a guy who will just stand there and look at me not knowing what to do. I want a guy who will argue with me over who loves who more not just say "um... ok love you 2?" as if it's a question. If you can do this for me I will love you for as long as I live.

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This is kinda based of my bf. I've been thinking about how I would love for him to just come up behind me and wrap his arms around me but he doesn't he just stands as far away from me as possible barely even looks at me. I would love to have a bf like this I would be in Paradise.
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emily23 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 31 2010 at 11:53 am
emily23 BRONZE, Solon, Maine
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u weirdo hehe
emily23 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 31 2010 at 11:49 am
emily23 BRONZE, Solon, Maine
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exactly but only a few certain boys will do that
Drama_Queen13 DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 30 2010 at 8:59 am
Drama_Queen13 DIAMOND, Nantucket, Massachusetts
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Awwwww!!!! This is so sweet! I always say I want a boyfriend who will wrap his arms around me all sweet like Tony & Summer. Awesome poem, WRITE MORE!!!!
Rosalie PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 30 2010 at 6:45 am
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this is good!
emily23 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 9:02 am
emily23 BRONZE, Solon, Maine
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yea there are a lot of guys at my school who do that but i've never been lucky enough to have a bf who will
choirchic101 SILVER said...
on Jan. 7 2010 at 8:10 pm
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i like this its good
Breingan122 said...
on Dec. 21 2009 at 10:37 am
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EMIIIILLLYYYY! hey.
emily23 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 14 2009 at 7:37 pm
emily23 BRONZE, Solon, Maine
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i know i need to change the comment cuz this is now inspired by my ex bf
SilverAngel SILVER said...
on Dec. 14 2009 at 4:09 pm
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I know what you mean! In every story, it makes you imagine how everyone wishes a guy was, but they never really are!
lexi<3 GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2009 at 7:10 pm
lexi<3 GOLD, Spaulding, South Dakota
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i like this a lot! its exactly how i feel. it always seems we want what we dont have, doesn't it? i just want the guy that does exactly everything you just said. if only...