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Autumn Leaves
November 27, 2009
Autumn comes and brings a breeze
To blow down all the autumn leaves
To dance until they touch the Ground and you try to catch them
In your hand as they fall
Upon you one by one and making
You an autumn tree.
© Garrett M.
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This article has 3 comments.
PenWizard1 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 10:20 am
It starts off alright, but then you lose what your trying to say, and or get across to the reader. I think the best thing you can do is add more lines, by doing this, you'll get your idea across. Keep up the great work, maybe you'll be the next Robert Frost.
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 9:29 am
Okay I like the idea, but the format isn't so good. Poetry kinda has this flow to it, and you had it at the beginning, but you started to lose it near the end. Keep trying!
-Angel
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