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~Life~

December 6, 2009
By noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.


The earth grooms and shelters itself.
It combs and sweeps the smooth rocks and sweet rivers.
The fresh taste of the wind still lingers on my tounge.
the sweet smell of victory is indented into the core.
Forevermore.
The birds fly over head looking for a branch to offer rest.
The creeks tarries endlessly, carving there way through the trees and rocks and mountains.
They flow gentel and soft, quiet and smooth.
They offer all they are with every drop.
Sip and befull, drink and bask in it's delight.
Rest on the bank of tender soft moss.
Listen to the trees whisper the truth about this place.
It was made for good.


The author's comments:
I hope you enjoy it as much as I.

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on Mar. 1 2010 at 7:47 pm
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

I'm so blessed.:)

on Feb. 17 2010 at 3:05 pm
AmberAnn_d-_-b SILVER, Laconia, New Hampshire
9 articles 12 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't sweat the small stuff, and its all small stuff."~CFC

Your welcome, and god bless you too. I believe you will be very successful if you keep writing poems with great details such as this.

on Feb. 17 2010 at 8:34 am
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

Well I'm so glad you are pleased with my work. Thank-you so much for your compliment. God bless.:)

on Feb. 16 2010 at 12:09 pm
AmberAnn_d-_-b SILVER, Laconia, New Hampshire
9 articles 12 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't sweat the small stuff, and its all small stuff."~CFC

This is a very beautiful poem.