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Cherish

December 11, 2009
By CaptainFabulous. GOLD, Union, Missouri
CaptainFabulous. GOLD, Union, Missouri
11 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
PERSONAL FAVORITE QUOTE::::

"When life hands you lemons,make BEEF STEW!"
-Andy Milanokis?(sp)


Sporatic moments of happiness,
Have gone away.
Now,I know I'm always okay.
No more holding on to hope,
I know it's always there.
Myself is in my own hands,
To cherish and take care.
I search deep within my soul,
To find what i love most.
No more moping around,
Like a long-gone, life-lost ghost.
It's time to pick up the slack,
On this story I call life.
Love, laugh, learn...
Live?
I just might.



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Miseltoe said...
on Apr. 10 2010 at 2:28 pm
hi i really like your work its deep has a nice rythm n sounds real.

inspir3d GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 1:13 pm
inspir3d GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
11 articles 2 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
We're all just looking for attention, to be discovered overnight. We're all frustrated by the popular ones that claim the limelight before they fall to pieces. So many of us are stuck under the radar--what makes me different? You decide!

this is great!! :) 

however, there's a couple phrases that throw off ur rhythm (esp "moping around"). i would rephrase...but great job!!


on Feb. 15 2010 at 8:40 pm
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
54 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
poetry is a diary written out loud

your really good!!!!!!! your poems make me happy!! makes me want to go out theres and have hope even things dont look so bright

coyne3 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 10:07 pm
coyne3 BRONZE, Watertown, CT, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments
this is cool it almost reads like a conversation i really like the ending sorta optimistic

on Feb. 5 2010 at 12:29 pm
CaptainFabulous. GOLD, Union, Missouri
11 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
PERSONAL FAVORITE QUOTE::::

"When life hands you lemons,make BEEF STEW!"
-Andy Milanokis?(sp)

thank you !!

KaitE BRONZE said...
on Feb. 5 2010 at 8:00 am
KaitE BRONZE, Safety Harbor, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments
Very good the ryming was good not too dr sues just enough to give it a good rythm.

on Feb. 3 2010 at 6:27 pm
CaptainFabulous. GOLD, Union, Missouri
11 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
PERSONAL FAVORITE QUOTE::::

"When life hands you lemons,make BEEF STEW!"
-Andy Milanokis?(sp)

thank you i love getting comments :DDD

on Jan. 31 2010 at 11:26 am
I liked this! It had mystery and allure. Nice job.

on Jan. 28 2010 at 5:42 pm
CaptainFabulous. GOLD, Union, Missouri
11 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
PERSONAL FAVORITE QUOTE::::

"When life hands you lemons,make BEEF STEW!"
-Andy Milanokis?(sp)

thank you !!

on Jan. 28 2010 at 5:25 pm
Lydia_the_dwarf PLATINUM, Jamison, Pennsylvania
26 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Following the light of the sun, we left the old world." -Christopher Columbus

"You live by what you thrill to, and there's the end of it" -D. H. Lawrence

"If you're going through hell, keep going" -Winston Churchill

LOVE the last night. Really fab! Nice word choice!

on Jan. 27 2010 at 9:34 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
36 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

im still trying to figure out wut this is about

on Jan. 23 2010 at 2:59 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
36 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

hhhhmmmm, makes me wonder.....

I LIKE IT THOUGH!!

thanks for looking at my poems......