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January 17, 2010
By kimmycakes GOLD, Monrovia, California
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kimmycakes GOLD, Monrovia, California
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"never let love bring u down" also "and so the lion fell in love with the lamb"

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i wonder if he cared for me as much as i cared for him...
i wonder if he loved me as much as i loved him...
i wonder if he loved me or her...
i wonder if our relationship was just a joke...
i wonder if he thought i was a toy he can just mess around with the emotions...
i wonder if he really wanted me...
i wonder if me n him were ment to be...
i wonder if he just thought he can just get a lay over whenever he wanted it...
i wonder if he ment every word he said...
i wonder why everything he put me threw i still have the guts to take him back...
i wonder why i cant get over him...
i wonder if he thought i was just going to forget everything he put me threw...
i wonder if i take him back he will be a changed man...
i wonder if it is love or its just me wanting love n him just doing it to do it...
i wonder if he thinks im just a chapter in his book...

i dont know how i can honestly get over this guy.... 1 year knowing him...5 months of relationship... we loved eachother b4 going out...so i thought we did love eachother.... i cant believe i wasted my time for a relationship that wasnt going to last

© Kelly L., Brooklyn, NY

The author's comments:
im basically writing this about wondering what the facts r u know?? like a girl wonders what the guy is thinking stuff like that...there questions
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kimmycakes GOLD said...
on Jan. 24 2010 at 5:14 pm
kimmycakes GOLD, Monrovia, California
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Favorite Quote:
"never let love bring u down" also "and so the lion fell in love with the lamb"

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thank you very much...well i wasn't trying to rhyme i just wrote it to write it lol
nottooperfect said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 2:33 am
nottooperfect, Faisalabad, Other
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well you do not waste time on relationships that never last instead after your break up they become a beautiful chapter in your life's book. And you learn from your mistakes and learn to laugh at yourself! so chill up n by the way it was good keep writing! :)
darb_iamsecond BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 8:56 pm
darb_iamsecond BRONZE, None Ya, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Psalms 63
Because your love is better than life,
my lips will glorify you.

I will praise you as long as I live,
and in your name I will lift up my hands.

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gah love it. I feel that way right now... Everybody read my stuff and tell me whatcha think (:
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 7:17 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

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I can relate to all of this and I'm glad you were able to put all those thoughts into words because its been too confusing for me. keep writing
Brebre95 SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 7:51 pm
Brebre95 SILVER, Roeland Park, Kansas
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i love it, but please write all the words out not in txt. but still beautiful.
his_country_girl SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 12:23 pm
his_country_girl SILVER, Goshen, Indiana
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"Reality is almost always wrong."-House

"Don't worry when you feel something, worry when you don't."- SVU

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amazingly written. =) keep writing poetry, you definitely have a talent. =D
CardinalRunner BRONZE said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 8:00 am
CardinalRunner BRONZE, Holland, Michigan
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I enjoyed this poem, and sometimes I wonder some of the same things
LoraBora BRONZE said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 7:44 am
LoraBora BRONZE, Bloomingdale, Michigan
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"What do you want, Mary? Do you want the moon?" --George Bailey from It's A Wonderful Life

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I loved it, thanks for writing it : ))
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 11:12 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx
Ember013 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 8:42 am
Ember013 BRONZE, Wichita Falls, Texas
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"You can only live once, make the best of it because the song at your funeral might not be the one you want played!"[;

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Doesn't every girl ask these questions after a tough relationship?! I give 5 stars.(: