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Things Look Nicer Underwater, Except You Can't Breathe MAG

February 7, 2010
By BlueFoot GOLD, Reston, Virginia
BlueFoot GOLD, Reston, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Life passes most people by while they're making grand plans for it,"


The trademarked thud-thud-thud of the diving board
after a 9-year-old goggled goon was sent free flying through the air
became more and more inseparable from my pounding heart
the closer and closer that you walked.
Following the curves of your red string bikini
might have been initially interpreted as creepy.
But from three feet underwater,
tiny bubbles that slipped out of my mouth
were rendered into as high a degree of meaninglessness
when they reached the surface and popped into the tremendous, echoing atmosphere
as any words that could have slipped out of my mouth
toward you
on the clammy pool deck
that felt inexplicably cold
for such a warm July day.



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Brynn BRONZE said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 6:33 pm
Brynn BRONZE, Aubrey, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step onto the road, and if you don't keep your feet, there's no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~Bilbo Baggins

Nice job. It made me smile when I read about halfway through. ^^

on Apr. 9 2010 at 6:00 pm
Natherine PLATINUM, Lawrence, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"everything happens for a a reason "

I THINK UR WORK IIS GREATT HMU AND LMK WAT U THINK OF MINE PLS AND THNX :P

BlueFoot GOLD said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 11:36 pm
BlueFoot GOLD, Reston, Virginia
18 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life passes most people by while they're making grand plans for it,"

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HPGGMRAR GOLD said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 2:24 pm
HPGGMRAR GOLD, Kennesaw, Georgia
14 articles 6 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I musn't forget I'm alive."
Ray Bradbury (Dandelion Wine)

:) Nice. "...might have been initially interpreted as creepy" That line made me laugh. And I love the last few lines.

on Feb. 28 2010 at 2:28 pm
beccasara12 BRONZE, Guttenberg, New Jersey
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wow this is really deep... great job! keep it up! BTW if you get a chance check out some of my poems i'd luv to hear ure opinion!