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Bottled Up

February 12, 2010
By J.AnnDaniels SILVER, Dededo, Other
J.AnnDaniels SILVER, Dededo, Other
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Bottled up
Deep inside
A person shattered into a million pieces
That no one can find
Afraid turn to anyone
Scared to be judged
Pain unknown to those around
Buried in so not a soul can to see
Trying to keep it together
Tears dropping down
Emotions bursting at the seams
Threatening to spill out
Getting harder to keep in
Heart aching to fight the tides
Why is this getting so hard?
It can’t get any worse,
Can it?



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on Feb. 28 2010 at 8:12 pm
writerscramp01 GOLD, Green Bay, Wisconsin
11 articles 6 photos 51 comments
VERY GOOD i've noticed all your poems so far are about deep emotions that you aren't sure what to deal with. Most people shy away from writting about that. They act like they are deep writers but they are just going off their idea of deep, not what they really feel. Your work is obviously heartfelt. This is Mag worthy. Keep up the good work!

~Writerscramp(01)